Reviews for In Memory I
halleberry1995 chapter 10 . 9/30
Brilliant! Is there more? :D
KaylaBears18 chapter 10 . 9/26
It’s a shame this story hasn’t been updated in awhile it was a good story!
falsepermanence chapter 10 . 7/12
im so sad there will most likely never be more of this but i know it would've been magnificent and im glad i got to experience the little of it that i did
falsepermanence chapter 2 . 7/11
is this the same hedwig as canon just black colored or a different owl entirely, i wonder
skylarenderbrine chapter 10 . 5/17
ᵘʷᵘ oh fuck ᵘʷᵘ ᵘʷᵘ
ᵘʷᵘ ᵘʷᵘ ᵘʷᵘ
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ᵘʷᵘ ᵘʷᵘ fuck it, sorry guys
ᵘʷᵘ ᵘʷᵘ ᵘʷᵘ ᵘʷᵘ
ᵘʷᵘ ᵘʷᵘ sorry im fucking dropping
ᵘʷᵘ my uwus all over the ᵘʷᵘ place ᵘʷᵘ
ᵘʷᵘ ᵘʷᵘ fuck- sorry
that's how I feel about the book much uwu such wow keep up the good work
Guest chapter 10 . 3/4
Becka, dear, it's been years since you updated. Of course it's understandable that you left your stories, whether you got too busy or simply lost interest but, if you have it, do you think you might consider posting the plan you had for the rest of the story so that your readers might enjoy the lovely plot line that you've set up here? Thank you for sharing your talent
mumphie chapter 10 . 11/25/2018
ch.10 - I realize that by now, nearly 10 years since you wrote yourself into a corner, that real life has taken you and this is but a memory. It is too bad, really. You write very well and in an intriguing manner. You draw the reader in. So many possibilities, so many way this could go. Perhaps you can shake your muse of the closet and come back again. I hope so.
mumphie chapter 2 . 11/25/2018
ch.2 - well done - a great ending to the chapter and a nice turn of phrase.
mumphie chapter 1 . 11/25/2018
ch.1- a very interesting beginning and quite a different take.
L0NE PIPER chapter 10 . 10/3/2018
I find this a great book that is very interesting to read.
I really enjoy how you characters have a feeling of depth and that their feelings are not just told to us they are hinted at in numerous ways.
Over all a great book and I wish you had continued.
teachmehowtofall chapter 10 . 7/29/2018
okay so it has been ten years since this story was updated and your author's note is who knows how old but i just want to say this story is probably the best slytherin harry i have ever read in my entire life and i love it more than i can say. i sent it to one of my friends after reading chapter 1 because i could just Tell it was going to be great and it Is and i hope that you do update it but if you don't i am still weirdly glad that it's out here and has being because not everything is perfect in this world and this story is one of them only in that it's unfinished. genuinely this is so well-done and i love it so much.
Jeanelle1910 chapter 7 . 6/1/2018
hey
I find myself in a quarandy as i like your story so much I read over the mistakes
But so far all the nights with the shadows haven't had any impact on him and why wouldn't they modify the dursleys behaviour? he is neither cunning nor ruthless, hasn't used magic to get the Dursleys to forget him while living there.. and that irks me. a lot
by the way he should have had "heartaches" already
Angelshell101 chapter 10 . 5/17/2018
i love this story is it discontinued? i hope not please keep it going
Hanyouprincess3 chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
I think you should also put in a trigger and sexual abuse warning.
Darklightningstorm chapter 10 . 5/7/2018
This was wonderful. I stayed up way too late last night reading it. I hope the rewrite is going well. Or that you might just continue this, if you've thought of a way out of the corner you say you've written yourself into.
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