Reviews for Redemption
Shi'ar chapter 10 . 11/14/2011
Merciful Merlin, that was beautifully done. Especially the ending...but such a heart-rending end! And to leave it thus..tragedy! It's truly a shame that you have left the SS/HG realm, most especially such a brilliant story unfinished! :( I would have dearly loved to read the second part you were planning. Your Severus was written magnificently, his way of speaking so deep and eloquent. So tragic, tortured..yet needy. Oh I am just so saddened to have finally found his only to see it's been so long since you've left it. Well, thank you for the beauty of this story..I loved it and hope some day you will return and grace us once more with your brilliance.
Epiphany Rising chapter 10 . 6/17/2011
I loves the aliterations.

This was a great story.

Where is the sequel?
Pontificator chapter 4 . 8/12/2006
This is a brilliant line: "- I believe the beauty of thinking is that it requires no verbal output."

Other than that, another excellent chapter, and I like that you've stopped the Septimus/Hermione...sort-of-dalliance because I'm happy that the unnecessary and distracting drama/tension from the triangle it would create won't occur.
Pontificator chapter 3 . 8/12/2006
A highly entertaining chapter. The plot thickens deliciously. Again, the humor works quite well ("But what has he got Jane Austen for?"), and your Dumbledore always manages to crack me up.


1) There is no such word as "quizitive." It's "inquisitive."

2) I think it's mentioned in the first book that Snape was James's rival on the Quidditch pitch. He was on the Slytherin team.

3) I can't really see Hermione getting drunk with a stranger.
Pontificator chapter 2 . 8/11/2006
Right before you introduced Neville, you had me thinking for a second that the famous wizard was going to Harry, and though I quickly realized it wasn't, that was a nice piece of misdirection. Fudge's utter obstinacy is hilarious, as usual. Well done.
Pontificator chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
Delightfully witty and an intriguing premise equals major excitement. Plus, your characterizations of Hermione and Snape are quite accurate, although I'm not too sure about Hermione being "slight and ethereal."
tigger2025643119 chapter 10 . 5/8/2006
I really really enjoyed this! The story was grovyness, the character's were perfect's just wonderful!

Very well done and I can't wait to read the next part! I've already got it in a page to read now!
Bonn chapter 10 . 4/4/2006
my god talk about cliffhanger, brilliant writing, but bloody cliffhangers, i cannot wait to read part 2 god damn it.
Sunnypeach chapter 10 . 7/18/2004
Great story. Do we have to wait long for the second part? Can't wait to see what will happen.
Xaverianne chapter 5 . 6/16/2004
Really good!
rema chapter 10 . 4/9/2004
OMYG! this is the first hermione/snape fic that i have ever read but i LOVED it! it was really good and it was REALLY well written!it was really original and i cant wait to read the "next installment". one thing i want to say is NO! HERMIONE CANT HATE SNAPE FOREVER! i never thought it b4, but in the way that you developed (sp) the characters, they go really well with each other! please make them be together?
please please please please email me when you upload repossesion!cant wait to read the next part!
rema xoxoxox
Dorothy chapter 10 . 4/7/2004
hurry with repossession cant wait what a wonderful story.
slipper balloon chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
Just stumbled on this today, and, wow, happy me. Lovely to find a fic with compelling, flawed characters. Your Severus strikes me as dead-on. Like Draco, too.
And what a plot twist, to bring back Sirius from the dead. Leave it to Sirius to commit the ultimate act of egocentrism and deny his own mortality. :)
becka5 chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
I like this story already, I can't wait to read the rest!
olka-polka chapter 10 . 12/19/2003
I have read the story on one breath. I am shaken, crushed, but nevertheless I hope …
Surprising on the depth of the story. The characters just such, with what I always saw and represented them. How it was possible to you so to plunge into their world? It is more tremendous. A huge thank. I'll wait for sequel.
(Sorry for my English :))
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