so cute.
I can totally see it.

"Louie, this looks like the beginning of a beautiful friendship." Good characterization, spell & punctuation could use a little tweaking.

aw, cute!

nice story really cute too :) good luck with ur stories

love dragi

i can see Vinnie trying to be tough at second grade and it's an endless source of amusement.

Few typo errors with punctuation and turning Vinnie into a "she" at one point, but overall a touching first meeting.

Ah.

Loved it the firts time I read it. Love it still, but now I can leave a review. Ta da! Like? I find it funny how Vinnie is always trying to prove himself that he's tough. If he didn't try so hard, I might believe him. (maybe not). So when's Modo (my main mouse) going to show up? You gotta love the gentlemouse. Anyway, keep writing, I know I'll keep reading.

Smile, Live, Laugh, Love and God Bless.

Namarie

Elfy

How can you do anything but love this. Vinnie sounds so cute and Throttle is such a great big brother figure.

More Hayden, gives us lots more.

Morning