Characterization nice, spelling & punctuation, not so much. Well, it is a seven year old story; you were younger then.

That's a very good story...keep up the great work!

*laughs at the thought of vinnie always thinking girls will be icky*

Touching scene, but not enough happens to call it a story. Though I am glad to see I'm not the only one who thinks Vinnie didn't have a father in his life.

Hi Hayden,

You know I love this story it's so sweet and gives you the warm fuzzies.

Oh I hope you are thinking about finishing Bloodties. You left us hanging on a breath wondering what was going to happen to our sweet Zoey.

You'll always be one of the best BM writers around.

Hugs

Morning