Reviews for Speak
kandy chapter 4 . 8/11/2008
stupid kagura..lol..im lovin dis story
kandy chapter 3 . 8/11/2008
aw..he protected her..sob sob sry im a suker for diz kinda junk..wow yur really of the best stories if read
kandy chapter 2 . 8/11/2008
aww..poor rin she get hit..evil aunt if i was her shed b dead by now..i wonder if seeshomaru will help her..yur talented im enjoyin diz story alot although i only read one page of it
Krazi3-AnimeLover chapter 7 . 12/20/2007
I olove this story...It's so cute!I can't believe it's over..(pouts) it's like fruits basket if you ever seen it...I think I really like this for me to compare it to fruits basket...it's like Kyo and TohruSesshomaru and Rin

ME LOVIE!

sa that it ended though!Just like fruits basket wish it could have gone on forever!
BladeMaxwell-GoddessofDeath chapter 7 . 12/15/2007
that was a sweet fic.

you did an awsom job.

kudos for you!
yellowspotlight89 chapter 7 . 9/3/2007
It was a soft, happy ending. Aww.
yellowspotlight89 chapter 2 . 9/3/2007
I loved this chapter. Must keep going!
yellowspotlight89 chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Where you're going with this is lovely. It reads like a semi-smooth slope, like you know where you're going with this. Especially with the repetition of the people dissapearing/not looking at her once she looks at them, ect. it's like they come to taunt or tell her something, then she's ignored. It really aids the lonliness theme.

One thing I would suggest is that you show more, less telling.

"The bus rasps in front of my house." that's a showing thing, she's seeing/expiriencing therefore we see and expirence it. I like that opening.

I shift uncomfortably and stand up from the ground I sit on.
angelofsongs chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
Sesshoumaru is saying why all the tym lol!

gud story!
angelofsongs chapter 2 . 3/22/2007
Thtz the kind of aunt I would strangle

Poor Rin

Gud job!
Your Secret Valentine chapter 7 . 10/30/2006
Okay, that might be one of the best fics I've ever read. Thank you God, there are good writers out there. -worships at your feet- XD As you can tell, I loved this story. I think I might wanna go and read it over again. _
Peter Pan chapter 6 . 10/26/2006
This is so simple, yet it's still fantastic at the same time D
Jibber Jabber chapter 2 . 10/26/2006
Interesting...this fic deserves more reviews )
Katy-Chan chapter 7 . 9/23/2006
DUDE THAT WAS SO AWESOME THAT STORY KICKS ASS

I love "love tragedy aganst-ish" stories
MayumiCrimson chapter 7 . 7/25/2006
sequal..SEQUAL..uh I mean yeah cool story
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