Reviews for A Part
Aura Black Chan chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
Whoa. Excellent. You should add to this. It's an interesting twist on Ryou and how he views his place among his friends.
Tsunamimbw chapter 1 . 11/22/2003
dude... this story actually made me get off my butt (not literally) and type a review... MY FIRST REVIEW IN... 3 or 4 months... oo

whoa... this was cool!

Can you write one for Jou and Honda too? Honda shall die... MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...

*ahem*

Can you R&R my story, Daughter of the Nile?
Sour Schuyler chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
Holy SHIT. That was FREAKY! But good...
Mamono chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
Oh wow, that was wicked! Not just evil, but cool too! You know, I always did wonder why Ryou was never included with them...

Cool!
Yami hitokiri chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
O... creepy! :-p That's a very good story!

Hehe, poor Anzu. But she brought it upon hereslf didn't she? Poor stupid Anzu...

I kinda feel sorry for her! :-p

...

"There's a place safer the Shanghai, its called hell..."

-Saito Haijjeme

"I'm exctied. Just the thought that your scared to death; I'm thrilled!"

-Yami no Bakura
Masked Reviewer chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
Alright! This was completely satisfying. Not that I dislike Anzu. In fact I don't believe in disliking any characters from shows I watch. It only makes things more frustrating.

But, the only sucky thing is, fics like this, with this level of quality and creepiness are more often than not one-shots. If only there were a way to incorporate the entertainment of one-shot creepiness into novel-length fics. But then it wouldn't be as creepy...

Oh well. I really like the direction you went with this. Frankly, I look forward to reading more of your work. Great job.
Sugomi chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Very nice dark fanfiction. Of course, it features Ryou. I kind of know the feeling Ryou had when he wasn't being included. Heh. At least you didn't make Anzu seem like a friendship-obsessed girl with no brain what-so-ever, even if you do hate her. I really hate those kinds of fics, so I applaud you on making an implied Anzu-dies fic without the obvious bashing.
DreamingChild chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Hm... creepy. Could have used a little more background into why Ryou became so cold. Still... creepy.
rhy-k chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Tea Kiler!

How could u. Turning sweet innocent Rouy into ... into...

Well u know...

update!
THE Chichiri no Miko chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
O! Spooky! Ryou was so...soo...sekushi! I like the psycho ones though...wow..I've never thought of him going all..yami-like! I liked it a lot! Great job once again...and hooray for Anzu death! I guess I'm not the only one who hates that cow! YAY! o..can I get a copy of that tape? ~pulls out some money~I'll pay ya 50 bucks!

Ryou:...Baka

CnM:~beats Ryou with a waffle iron~ Anyways! I think this was a great fic! Nice creative thinking! Turning the tables! EXCELLANT! Keep up your good work!

Ryou: x.x'
x0xStephanie chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
you might have had no clue where that came from, but it was pretty awsome!
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