|Reviews for A Vow of Serenity|
| animegirl73 chapter 18 . 12/30/2014
A very good story. I really enjoyed it. Wished for more Endy and Serenity, but still loved the story.
| mryann chapter 4 . 12/29/2014
You have a lovely way with words and i hope you can right more.. The developments are really great and i love the interactions..m
| mryann chapter 3 . 12/20/2014
The story is interesting in itself and even if i am not able to see endy... It is fine.. But i am looking forward to their meeting! I love how you show the live bet luna and artemis
| mryann chapter 2 . 12/19/2014
I cant help but cry. . the emitiobs the character portrays us so giod thar i can easily relate... I love how you lay out the characters emotions and relatiobship to each other . hope youll write more!
| mryann chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
This is really interesting.. I am looking forward to the next chapter..
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/29/2014
Amazing story which is an interesting take on the SM story. Loved the whole thing but was a little confused at the ending. Did Sere and Endy end up together at the end or did she marry someone else? Maybe I missed something...
| Fille Bleue chapter 18 . 11/4/2014
I just wanted to let you know that this story had me absolutely captivated! I relished in each chapter and I am enamored of your characterizations and plot development. I hardly ever leave reviews (I feel awful admitting that since authors always plead for them) but I felt compelled to leave a note to you. Thank you for writing and posting this wonderful story!
| Vipaka chapter 18 . 10/28/2014
Few slip ups here and there-one of the early chapters (3 or 4) has Luna calling Casamir Serenity before the identity reveal, before Luna even knows she's female I believe. Serenity's explanation of descending from Selene is shown as shocking to the girl's twice, even after the first reveal when they should have already heard it during the convo with Endymion over the globe. The silver crystal also got a double-shock moment, if memory serves. Beryl is repeatedly shocked by Serenity's survival when she is shown earlier to already know about it (one of the first scenes with Beryl indicates she knows Serenity is alive but in her very next scene she is surprised by the news). First chapters were a little rough in writing style but later chapters are quite polished. This is actually the second time I've read this story, I read it years ago but remembered that it was a gem so I decided to re-read. Very very few typos, grammar or spelling mistakes, so if you edited this yourself, kudos!
Your description of Metallia's force infecting Beryl is absolutely spot on in how vile it sounds.
I was impressed by the character development for Serenity and Rei. Your story does something few do, which is put life into characters outside the main two, side characters reacted like human beings and not just props supporting the protagonist.
The story itself is pretty solid, it could use some pacing improvements in a few places but overall its great. I think with a few minor touch ups to the earlier chapters and slip-ups mentioned above it could rise from great to masterpiece. :) Wonderful job, very impressive writing for a fanfiction piece.
| Hope1494 chapter 18 . 10/10/2014
I have to tell you that this is one of the best stories I have ever read! I loved it and really connected with this story, you could take this and publish it.(Changing names of course) I really think it would sell, you might have to adjust it since people won't automatically be able to know some things, but really the only thing i think might be a little confusing is the reference to them feeling like they have meet before, and the mention of Pluto as the keeper of time. If you do rewrite it to publish it as an original story please let me know, and i will be there to buy it the day it's released. Thank you for all the time and hard work you put into this. I don't usually read long fanfiction, but i'm glad i choose to read yours. I loved the epilogue, because I believe that is the most realistic ending, however it still almost made me cry to think of them not always being together lol
| buffy fan chapter 16 . 9/2/2014
I loved this story from start to finish. Creative in an advanced way and it tied the SM plot into another world wonderfully. Even things like the sword at the end were very different than would be expected of fanfiction. Major kudos!
| Sleepyreader319 chapter 18 . 8/17/2014
It was amazing! Can't wait to read the fanfic featuring Minako!
| AlohaHannah chapter 18 . 7/11/2014
Awww, great story :)
| kimchi759 chapter 18 . 4/20/2014
It was so much fun seeing your writing improve chapter by chapter and watching events unfold with increasing clarity. Definitely favorited. :)
| kimchi759 chapter 7 . 4/19/2014
I'm confused...I don't remember Serenity ever telling Rei she was a princess. Confuzzled to the extreme
| kimchi759 chapter 4 . 4/19/2014
I keep getting the feeling Kenn is Ami...or something like that. Let me backtrack before I assume and make an arse out of myself.