what can i say? it was an amazing ride and even though it took so long i stood by it till the end! it was such a great story and its one of those that i can reread and still be able to appreciate the work. i will be hearing more of you i hope and congrats on a great story!

I gotta say, I'm a little disappointed with the epilogue on this one. It could be because I haven't read the rest of the story for a while but I'd like to think that I remember the rest of it enough to make a reasonable critique. I think it leaned a little too much into the next part of the story, rather then concluding this one.

lovely

love it

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lost of Ls. . .

this was a really great story and I really can't wait to read the sequel. Lol.

WOW! amazing as usual! it's just so sad seeing this whole thing come to an end. it feels like it should just continue on and on! i mean, i remember reading one of the 1st chapters around two years ago or something and just FALLING IN LOVE! But, everything has to end sometime, right? I can't wait till the sequel! I will wait for as long as i have to! Didn't you say you were making this into a book? i really want to buy it. What's the name and stuff? By the way, i don't think you should change your pen name. this one's really cool and nice.

Congratulations on finishing a truly wonderful tale. It was an engaging twist on a beloved story. Your writing style was beautiful and each update was a true treasure.

I always thought your pen name was kinda neat. Somewhat selfishly, I'd be worried that I couldn't find the Minako-centric sequel when you decided to start posting if you changed it.

aww *wipes away tears* it still leaves open for another story :3 but i loved this story.

Thanks for the update. it is nice to read a prologue.

Hope you write many more stories

I liked it. You did the darn thing. I like ur username but if you want to change it go for it. I cant wait for your next story and keep up the good work. I'm thinking about making your story, story of the month for December on my website.

Congrats on finishing this great story ! I've been reading it since the very beggining! Wow has it really been 4 years already? I love it and can't wait to read your next masterpiece.

wow! i cnt believe its over- i really loved this story- good work :)

p.s, i quite like your username :)

This was an amazing story. So excellently well written and intricately woven. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us!

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That was my favorite chapter, well that and the last one. I love your characterizations and the relationships between Cas and everyone. I especially like rei and Cas' relationship. This story has so much emotion and it's very captivating. I love how you also include people form the whole SM universe in the story!

I know it's a little late for this but if you would make changes and revisions in the future you might find these and take a little look at these:

chapter 5

“Serenity, go to Makoto and get boiled water and broth.” Kenn demanded. Serenity paused only

a moment before taking off. Behind her, Serenity heard a sharp pop and a brief cry- Kenn had

popped Rei’s arm back into the socket. Serenity winced for Rei.

*Isn't it that kenn still doesn't know Cas is Serenity and her real name for that, and even being a girl in this part?

Ami looked pensive, and when Serenity opened her mouth to inquire about what had her friend

so worried, she was cut off by a sudden trumpeting from the gates, and a loud call.

*Is Ami supposed to be the one who's about to ask Serenity, not the other way around?

BTW, I really liked your story, and I was very hooked... Keep up the good work. Just look out for grammatical and spelling errors, and you're going to be fine!

Kami-sama! This was absolutely AWESOME! I can't believe it! And I so can't wait to read the epilogue either!