Reviews for A Vow of Serenity
UntamedDarkeness chapter 18 . 12/2/2007
what can i say? it was an amazing ride and even though it took so long i stood by it till the end! it was such a great story and its one of those that i can reread and still be able to appreciate the work. i will be hearing more of you i hope and congrats on a great story!
Midnight chapter 18 . 12/2/2007
I gotta say, I'm a little disappointed with the epilogue on this one. It could be because I haven't read the rest of the story for a while but I'd like to think that I remember the rest of it enough to make a reasonable critique. I think it leaned a little too much into the next part of the story, rather then concluding this one.
ff9moonie chapter 18 . 12/2/2007

love it


lost of Ls. . .
Eternal Cosmic Sailor Saturn chapter 18 . 12/2/2007
this was a really great story and I really can't wait to read the sequel. Lol.
sailormoonie17 chapter 18 . 12/2/2007
WOW! amazing as usual! it's just so sad seeing this whole thing come to an end. it feels like it should just continue on and on! i mean, i remember reading one of the 1st chapters around two years ago or something and just FALLING IN LOVE! But, everything has to end sometime, right? I can't wait till the sequel! I will wait for as long as i have to! Didn't you say you were making this into a book? i really want to buy it. What's the name and stuff? By the way, i don't think you should change your pen name. this one's really cool and nice.
BleuFleur chapter 18 . 12/2/2007
Congratulations on finishing a truly wonderful tale. It was an engaging twist on a beloved story. Your writing style was beautiful and each update was a true treasure.

I always thought your pen name was kinda neat. Somewhat selfishly, I'd be worried that I couldn't find the Minako-centric sequel when you decided to start posting if you changed it.
Atradis chapter 18 . 12/2/2007
aww *wipes away tears* it still leaves open for another story :3 but i loved this story.
Dertupio chapter 18 . 12/2/2007
Thanks for the update. it is nice to read a prologue.

Hope you write many more stories
Rogue Cherokee chapter 18 . 12/2/2007
I liked it. You did the darn thing. I like ur username but if you want to change it go for it. I cant wait for your next story and keep up the good work. I'm thinking about making your story, story of the month for December on my website.
ssteph chapter 18 . 12/2/2007
Congrats on finishing this great story ! I've been reading it since the very beggining! Wow has it really been 4 years already? I love it and can't wait to read your next masterpiece.
asianprincess chapter 18 . 12/2/2007
wow! i cnt believe its over- i really loved this story- good work :)

p.s, i quite like your username :)
luftwave chapter 18 . 12/2/2007
This was an amazing story. So excellently well written and intricately woven. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us!

Danielle chapter 7 . 12/1/2007
That was my favorite chapter, well that and the last one. I love your characterizations and the relationships between Cas and everyone. I especially like rei and Cas' relationship. This story has so much emotion and it's very captivating. I love how you also include people form the whole SM universe in the story!
chocodips chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
I know it's a little late for this but if you would make changes and revisions in the future you might find these and take a little look at these:

chapter 5

“Serenity, go to Makoto and get boiled water and broth.” Kenn demanded. Serenity paused only

a moment before taking off. Behind her, Serenity heard a sharp pop and a brief cry- Kenn had

popped Rei’s arm back into the socket. Serenity winced for Rei.

*Isn't it that kenn still doesn't know Cas is Serenity and her real name for that, and even being a girl in this part?

Ami looked pensive, and when Serenity opened her mouth to inquire about what had her friend

so worried, she was cut off by a sudden trumpeting from the gates, and a loud call.

*Is Ami supposed to be the one who's about to ask Serenity, not the other way around?

BTW, I really liked your story, and I was very hooked... Keep up the good work. Just look out for grammatical and spelling errors, and you're going to be fine!
Eternal Cosmic Sailor Saturn chapter 17 . 11/21/2007
Kami-sama! This was absolutely AWESOME! I can't believe it! And I so can't wait to read the epilogue either!
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