Reviews for Lucky Break
Indigo Fireflight chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Ugh, I HATE cliffhangers. keep going :)
Karakin chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
sequal please do a sequl ur story rocks
Empress of Mice and her M chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
YES! this is Minion, not empress of mice, just so ya know.
It's a little unclear, but that can be fixed...more!
Nightsky821 chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
i think there should be a sequal
lixa chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
huh? that was nothin. Go on,keep on writing, it won't kill u. I like this angle of the story b/c usually Rouge's the one who has all the problems with trusting anyone, but here, you make it gambit. Maybe this similarity will help you make an interesting story of how they learned to trust together. I think it's good so far and has a lot of potential, but it's so short! continue the story pleez
Roguie-89 chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
Yes! Write the next chapter soon
wyndsong chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
er ... this one's a bit hard to follow, i think you need a little more narration to let the reader know what's happening ... as in how they get remy out of the cell and onto the plane, and when he loses consciousness and so on. sequel ... yes!

p.s. spellcheck
ishandahalf chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
spiffy. keep it coming! ;-)
leann chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
yes write more...please...no more tortue...hehee, i'm just kidding - about the torture part, please still continue. k, sugar rush over...end of message