Reviews for Brotherly Advice
tntfriday13 chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
this story was pure genuise! I give it a 100/100
cerberus309 chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
i think you should continue it. its got great potential.
WordTree chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
AWESOME fic. I *heart* your portrayal of Shuu-chan, and this particular scenario. It's something that needed to be addressed, and you did it so well! . Keep it up.

~Leah
metallicpunk chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
woah...KURAMA HAS A BROTHER! i never knew... but yeah, u should continue.
Rocki chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
For one, why didn't Hiei recognize that someone else was in the room with them when the two woke up? Hasn't he always been able to tell? I really hope you continue it but it is still good even if you don't. Oh, and I don't usually leave reviews so feel important! :grins:
kawaii chibi shun chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
The story is very good so far, I like that Kurama's stepbrother was the one who found them out. I only like yaoi if it is well written - this is very well written, and has a very good story. Please continue the story, it is great. Oh, and by the way, having Kurama be more bisexual than gay was a nice touch and very original; it shows just how much Hiei means to him if he could have potentially ended up with a girl instead but chose Hiei.
Jessica chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
Awesome add more and hurry thanks Jessica
Syaoran-Lover chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
I cracked up laughing as I progressed reading this!_

I don't think Hiei'll be too happy if he finds out that other people know...

Give it a shot, one chapter for Shiori finding out, another for her reaction, another for Shuu-chan meeting Hiei and so on... see, there's lots of story still... _~
shadow priestess chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
Kawaii! Of COURSE you have to continue this, DUH! Do so... I mean there's so much to see with Hiei's reaction anyways...
Shuffle Queen chapter 1 . 6/26/2004
What a cute story! Continue and update very quickly! Later.

~Shuffle Queen~
That Buggy Girl chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
Yeah...There's also a temple called the Kurama-dera temple up on Mount Hiei (I know about this...Did extensive research for a project for geography lecture. I mean, it was too cool to pass up! I'm sure Tracy [the professor] had no clue WHY I chose to use those two places, but it was fun for me! *dances in glee*)
Cassian chapter 1 . 3/11/2004
You should really update this. Think of this...umm...Hiei's reaction? Not that hard. Hiei: Lets kill him. It would be so much easier. I do think you should continue this, and make the chapter where Hiei meets Hatanaka Suuichi be in Hiei' POV. Hope that helped!
youko-love chapter 1 . 2/27/2004
I like it. It kind of rare to found a Shuichi H. story. Please continue it and as for ideas...I could see Hiei being angry a ningen caught him. I could also see shuichi-chan asking too many questions and getting a sword to his throat or shuichi could want Hiei as a brother-like person and Hiei might like him. Whatever you should probably ignore me I'm not that good at people's reactions to things. Update soon! Read my other story please.
Toki Mirage chapter 1 . 2/10/2004
i have only one thing to say...
is there a sequel?
refill chapter 1 . 12/27/2003
I think you should continue it! I really dont' like yaoi but hey! This fic is good!
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