|Reviews for The SoulCatcher|
| Inactive12345 chapter 2 . 3/23/2006
Heh, Terry sounds like a fun character! Nice job with this chapter. The initial journal entry is well-written, and a good way to introduce our setting. Well-done. :)
| Clouded Horizon chapter 2 . 3/14/2006
Again, very good. I like this. 'Our resident natural disaster' haha, that was funny! I'll be interested to see how Terry, Hazel and the hare bard link up, so please update very soon!
| Clouded Horizon chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Really really cool! The song was very good, you have a natural talent for poetry. The hare's an interesting character already, without even knowing his name. All in all, I like this story very much. :)
| Clove chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
i like it so far...are you going to put more up soon? I hope so! *looks at ur profile* HEY! LOTR & POTC! They're only,like, the 2 best movies (and books..ish) ever! :P
| Jade Green Eyes chapter 1 . 12/17/2003
Basil! Yes! Me luffs him. Me like this very much. And like the way you incorporated the poetry-ness into in. Tis good introduction type thing. Tis goodness. Write more. I want to read more! Write damned you! *threatens with pool noodle*
| kuyaga chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
interesting. a tip, remember to put a proper disclaimer. but it is a very nice ballad, and you might want to add the element of mystery to the hare's "wordless companion" because we don't know much about him/her yet.
| Nightbreeze chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
This is really great. And you can write poetry. I hope you put up more chapters.
| AnvilBlue chapter 1 . 11/17/2003
Wow...that was just totally cool...I love the imagery in the hare's song, sort of sad, but more of a simple truth. I especially like the "Past and Future, locked knife and knife," line of his song. This all makes me wonder how much of this is foreshadowing...
Me likes very much,
| Shadowed Fox chapter 1 . 11/17/2003
I dont know what you mean by this being crap. You are much better at capturing an audience in the first chapter. I only got 7 reviews with all 3 of mine. ::sigh:: true talent shines no matter where you put it
| Karamen Sandpaw chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
I like it so far! But, maybe some longer chapters in the future?
| Bubonic Woodchuck chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
Excellent so far! Keep up the great work!
| clara200 chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
That was a good start but a sad song. I love hares.
| Lady Storm chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
Hey, this isn't half bad! I love the figures of speech and strong words you threw in there - marks of a real talented writer. And so you are! I admit I don't see much excitement here yet, but as the plot thickens, it'll get better, I assume.
Please write some more - needs you! (O.o)
| The Silvercat chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
Wow! Very creative! I don't think I could have versed a song quite as poetic and... What's the word I'm thinking of? Elaborate? Well, something like that. Very nice start you have here, I'm looking forward to more! _
Kayla "Oni" Silvercat
| Inactive12345 chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
This is really good. Your song/poem is excellent, although I'm not sure whether a hare would sing a song in that... style. But I guess it is possible. Please continue this!