|Reviews for After the Dawn: The First Years|
| nanaeleanor chapter 15 . 9/26/2016
Nice. I do like the relationship between Sirius and Harry.
| nanaeleanor chapter 13 . 9/26/2016
I'm guessing this reveal was necessary to have any kind of plot, but it seems not believable that after being so careful for six years, Sirius would risk allowing Harry to tell all to a seven year old boy who could hardly relate to the level of danger they could be in. Not to mention jeopardizing Dan and his mothers safety. Also Harry doesn't seem like a seven year old. He acts and talks too grownup. More like thirteen.
| Destineyofme chapter 15 . 1/12/2016
please write more one day
| Elmerin chapter 2 . 8/17/2015
Hey, prologue looked great, but chapters 2, 3 and probably more, in italics, your stories very difficult to read. Also, could you put authors notes in bold, as it makes them easier to distinguish.
Good concept, poor layout.
| harryislife chapter 15 . 7/27/2015
I really like it, I think it would've been a good idea for Harry to learn Occlumency.
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/10/2015
I really enjoyed reading your story.
Thanks for writing.
You really need to work on plurals/possessives.
| tanithlipsky chapter 15 . 8/17/2014
nice and sad and funny and good
| tolraisgrey chapter 7 . 7/13/2014
Just a tiny thing, TaeKwonDo is a Korean Martial art, so you wouldn't address a teacher as sensei, and you wear a dobok, not a Gi. That's judo :) (a blue tag taekwondo artist)
Also Professors aren't really a British thing and you don't tend to change classes by subject in Primary school - at least not in England. But then I don't Scotland does either. Plus year 7 is at primary school in Scotland :)
| rosebud90 chapter 15 . 4/9/2014
I love u story
| Noble Korhedron chapter 15 . 10/16/2013
Wish you hadn't quit writing - then there might've been more than just this and AD: First Year... #sad #glum
| Noble Korhedron chapter 3 . 10/16/2013
Hmmm, interesting so far. On to Ch. 4! :-)
| Ash-Bookworm113 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
:O anyone mind if I kill Vernon...
no objections?...'kay then i'm gonna borrow Jason todd and his AK47, back in a minute!
:) evil smile
:P great chapter...even if the content was sad :(
| sylvelle chapter 14 . 5/8/2013
Wish you hadn't done that.
| quaff chapter 8 . 5/8/2013
Dudley was innocent.
| Byakugan789 chapter 15 . 1/21/2013
Not bad. Not really sure what people were complaining about. Only thing you really got wrong was killing of a dozen of Sirius' family 5 years early and people have done far far worse for AU's.
Also, your confusion with the belts. The reason you're confused is because very few Tai-kwon-do instructors use a concrete belt system, letalone actually teach tai-kwon-do. The belts change constantly from group to group and are more often a showboat for the parents thing than anything meaningful. A little tidbit for you though, tai-kwon-do is Korean, not japanese, so you'd be saying chokyonym or sabanym, not sensei. Kata is also the japanese word for patterns. Works if you're doing karate, which you mentioned briefly, but not tai-kwon-do which you referred to constantly.