Reviews for Narrowly Escaped
highlitergrl i'm too lazy to sign in lol chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
great story! i have one suggestion though: WRITE A SEQUEL! lolol
Mercury's Winter chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
Very well done. Nice couple of scenes :D Good characterization. Hope to see more from you
Mary Rose chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
Not too bad. You should switch paragraphs when the speaker switches. Sorry but it's my pet peeve.
Ascendant Angel chapter 1 . 11/20/2003
I like it but you could have added more tension by having Harper life in greater danger, and do they still use stitches in the future.
parisindy chapter 1 . 11/17/2003
very nice...i would have liked to know a little bit more of the back story but very nice
Gallifreyan Ginger chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
I loved that. It was a great one-shot fic and I loved the ending. Great job. -)
LittleRedhead chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
Good start. Please continue. You can't stop there.