|Reviews for Though the eyes of a dark elf|
| Manofmanyfaces chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
A good start
could use some work
but it definetly shows potental
| Xera Bregan chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
GOOD story. Nice romance... good point of veiw. Interseting adventures... the standard fanstasy fic! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, besides the grammer and stuff like that... but other than that, it was a good story! I loved it. Daria was cool, so was Zathress.
| Laureril chapter 1 . 11/20/2003
As far as I can tell, your story could do with some work, but shows promise. This is supposed to be CC, so don't think I'm flaming you. I just want to try and help you make your story better.
I've actually decided to send my suggestions in an e-mail since they've gotten a bit long.
Also, do you have a beta reader? Usually if you can find someone to look at your stuff before you post it turns out a lot better. I'd be willing to help you out, or you can visit the PPC message board ( PPC)and ask for a Krynn expert. I can think of several people who would be glad to help.