Reviews for Empty
Chibiusa-chan Minamino chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
Well, I think that the poem "Under That Smile" is better than "Empty", but both show the confusion in Soujirou's head. And that's what I like.

Kisses !
Jazzy Uchiha chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
it's OK
dadsnavygirl831 chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
*sob* Poor poor Soujiro...that was great! _
ReverberatingSilence chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
thats soo wonderful! u have a great great talent that is most certainly true!
-mKs
animegurl23 chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
This was a great poem!
Every single thing about was true about Soujiro!
It was also very sad.
Keep up the good work! _
Sakura Butterfly chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
oh my god! my eyes were watering up the whole time! that was so true! i love your writing so much! and i really loved this poem! and the fact that it was about soujiro makes it even better!

(3)(3) kiss kiss for soujiro, my one and only true love!
kenshinobsession chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
omg... dat poem is so TRUE! i like smile all da freakin time... but in life, i truly juss smile... mai smile is empty... for it is not wut i truly feel inside...
unique-starfish chapter 1 . 11/17/2003
why don't you like it? i thought that you portrayed soujiro nicely! this was kind of sad though...
chibi-tenken chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
I liked it!