Hey, pretty nice. I'm not fond of fic's that go a few years ahead of the original; People always make the characters so off on their personalities, but I feel like you've stuck to each of their personalities still. I've been waiting for a good Kei/Shi for a while.

Hello i have bin reading your fic and its really good im just wondering when your going to post more...im really excited about the story so please hurry and thank you for the japanese word translations they helped.

Hi,
I was wondering if this is the final chapter of this fic or will you explore what happens to Kei/Shin Post-Exams? It'd be interesting to see there relationship develope and how it'd affect everyone(especially Naru). Keep it going.
RONINS FIGHT!(Sorry, couldnt resist)

UPDATE SOON!
What can i say more?
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORH

Great story. It's nice to see Shinobu finally get together with her beloved sempai. Looking forward to further chapters.

Very good story so far. Nice plot, good characterisation and no glaring grammar errors. I await further chapters and future works with great anticipation.

I enjoyed this fanfiction. While fanfictions featuring Keitaro and Shinobu as a couple are popular, it's forgivable since it's plausible, especially in the anime continuity. The relationship between Keitaro and Shinobu is one of the major points of difference between the anime and manga. I have to commend the author on keeping the Love Hina characters in-character, for the most part. Shinobu seems to change, but that's acceptable given that characters do change in the Love Hina series itself.
My main complaint about this fiction centers on the heavy use of Japanese words. While the suffixes are important to Love Hina in particular (even the English-language manga preserves them in a way), there are far too many Japanese terms. Some of these are widely known to anime fans. However, as a general rule in fiction, anything that makes the work inaccessible to some readers should be reviewed carefully.

*poke* Here is your review, kareshi. My review is that.. YOU ROCK. XD

One good story. I guess like you, I'm a romantic myself. :)

Great Chapter. Love this story! Can't wait For more!

Poor Mutsumi-chan.

Ganbatte, Mutsumi-chan! You'll get him in my fic. (;

"..how much she often drew strength from him at others." Typopo?

There was some pretty powerful stuff in this chapter. I especially liked the bit of dialouge where Shinobu wouldn't give Keitaro back to Naru. Keep up the good work!

Keitaro and Shinobu FOREVER!

I'm not a fan of Naru but it's good that you showed the more sesitive side of her (if i can say that).

Anyway , I'm happy to see that FINALY Keitaro acts like a man and leaves her(Naru) for a sweet , and cute girl like Shinobu:)

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Woah! This chapter is powerful and full of energy! Shinobu and Keitaro are just so, so...MATURE! Wait, that didn't sound right. Oh well, just want to tell you that you potrayed them very, very well. Shinobu's talk with Naru was a classic. Wait, that didn't sound right either. Oh well, is this the last chapter?

This was far from the violent encounter that I was expecting. I think I had gotten the wrong idea about your intentions here ;) But then, I think any reader likes to be surprised by what they read, and the way you've gone here leaves much more room for good drama later on.

See ya next chapter _