Reviews for I Need to Know
hakubaikou chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
Wow, Akai. Wow. %$&# brilliant. This isn't a story. This is a dance. A beautifully intricate dance.

I love how you alternate their thoughts. I love how sometimes they come together, that Kenshin and Kaoru are thinking the same thing... And then in the next moment, they split apart again, both of them thinking the exact opposite thoughts.

I don't even know how to explain this, but when I was reading this, I could *feel* them hovering about each other, their thoughts weaving together and apart.

And then Hiko's words broke the wonderful rhythm between them, exactly as you intended. And the last line is beautiful.

Man, Akai, you've done it again. One of the shortest fics I've ever read, and you've done it once again. Most impressive.
JML chapter 1 . 11/18/2003
SU-KEZE! (think of how Yahiko says "COOL!" in Japanese)
Kaykoha Ayanithne chapter 1 . 11/18/2003
Wow! I have to say this is amazing, i really love how you blended their thoughts together, it turned out really nicely. I hope you write more!
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