|Reviews for The Numan Legacy|
| Synthesis Landale chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
Not bad. Her name is Rika, though, and I would have liked to have seen it a little longer. Still, short and sweet, and that's never a bad thing. I'd like to see more of your ideas; I'm sure you have a lot of potential. Don't be afraid to write it, just do it. You'll grow better the more you write.
| niki92286 chapter 1 . 11/19/2003