Reviews for Dark Betrayal
phoebuscat chapter 17 . 11/23/2014
Hmm.. Very rushed and not very exciting, is it. Plus, you have the very annoying habit of switching your tenses in the middle of a sentence.
That said, I love the original idea you had for Voldie and Pansy... that would have been fun to read!
ToddGilliss chapter 9 . 10/8/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
kyoshi711 chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
I've quit reading this story as it gets silly. Harry follows Dumby, when he should be cursing him and then he's going to explain what happened to Ginny. Christ is he still a 2 year old?
kyoshi711 chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
So Harry just pops in and saves Ginny and Dorkmort knows Ginny knows something. How?
kyoshi711 chapter 4 . 7/27/2013
If the owls could find Harry then surely so could everone else. Just follow the owls!
Guest chapter 17 . 11/8/2012
by his wish he was buried in coffin full of Lemon Drops

LOL hahhahahh LMFAO laughing my ass off at just one sentence one funny sentence
Entoarox chapter 17 . 10/21/2012
burried wahahahaha in wahahhaha lemondrop wahahahahahahahahahaaa!

of all the insane things for dumbles death, it had to be burried in lemondrops... wahahah!
dead feather chapter 4 . 3/4/2012
I tried. :) but jkr totally ruined this pairing for me. I should've checked the pairing before I started but Ginny is just so hard to swallow.

Not counting her, I think I would've enjoyed this story. I really wanted to see where you were taking this and how harry would act on the betrayals. Especiallt when the reason for his imprisonment was so flimsy. Can't believe his friends even bought it
Jamr chapter 4 . 12/29/2011
is this going to be a kiss and make up story?
Tearful Shadows chapter 17 . 7/6/2011
Loved it. Wish that there was more
akan chapter 17 . 7/15/2010
le thème est bon mais l'histoire n'est pas assez developpée.
RebeccaRoy chapter 4 . 5/18/2010
I hope Harry trusts Ginny, he needs here as she believed in him always.
RebeccaRoy chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
Oh if Dumbledore thinks that Ginny will bring Harry back to them, that will not happen, no that will not happen at all.
Ginnylove9990 chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
Dreat story. I like it very much
Jamr chapter 6 . 2/27/2010
I see why you quit this
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