Reviews for Rocket Child
MainlyPokemon chapter 1 . 5/21
The story is beautifully written, but the last chapters were horribly confusing, we never get any explanation on who "serebii" is, what do they mean by "guardians" the story would be less confusion if you clarify who these characters are as we have zero clues, or hints on who or what they are.
MasterOfIllusions2 chapter 11 . 1/13/2017
Good story. Horrible, confusing ending. I like conquest stories, and this had so much potential... but you took the easy way out with an ending that had nothing to do with the actual plot. Good for you. And by the way, Lance is definitely a boy.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/12/2016
I find your use of a Darth Vader quote... Amusing.
Aizen Sosuke-Sama chapter 11 . 11/5/2015
wtf the end is boring
Guest chapter 4 . 10/14/2015
Great story
Guest chapter 11 . 6/25/2013
This story was good but at the end it SUCKED MADE NO SENSE!
NY514 chapter 11 . 5/4/2013
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 11 . 12/3/2011
Interesting this was. Worth the read? You bet.
The Dark Side Has Yaoi chapter 11 . 7/31/2009
great story, is there a sequal?
SynctrainerLucas chapter 11 . 6/24/2008
Good story so Ash forgot he was in Team Rocket.
Electric Spoink on TPT chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
That was great! I was kind of dissapointed when it ended! I want much, much more out of this! You have NO idea how much potential this has. Also, looking at some of your other fics, some of them are so long they could be turned into short books!
Adeptis chapter 11 . 11/2/2007
good story, though it did get a bit confusing at the end /
brolly501 chapter 11 . 8/28/2007
er interesting i suppose
LuciferIsDivine chapter 11 . 6/10/2005
liked it
luccamajere26 chapter 11 . 5/6/2005
Hmm. Interesting ending. It ties in with your CCA fics. (which I have yet to exactly finish reading..heh) ~Lucca
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