Reviews for Illusion of Innocence
NaotoShiroganeFangirl1990 chapter 8 . 9/2/2009
what a beautiful story
Hikari Kage401 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
this is some mighty good story its of the charts
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
I don't like it. BUT I will it admit it is a good piece of story-telling, perhaps because there is more to this one, Nazura seems better defined...despite my actually not liking the character...and I apologise if I'm being just a little too honest here...There are also a number of really good bits in this and I especially like the beginning rhymes? or would you call them poems, I'm not sure (shrugs). This one is intense:"There are different kinds of wars...

People bleed even when they fight with themselves...

Even when...

Even when they smile... "

I do like the whole snake idea though, being a notable fan of the creatures myself-it would be so cool if you could do that! Best chap was number 5 and Yami's reactions along with the whole snake invasion thing was funny. But even more so chap8-man that one was intense and very good, the lines in between were just...i dont know..just!

Urm one question why is she quite fixated on Yugi? Like whats the connection? (Nazura)

oh and I know this is going to sound really bad (cringes) but if she's dead leaving the snakes behind or just gone for the moment then I quite like the ending...okay? (writes hesitatntly-wasn't meant to be so offensive before sorry)
Lola-Hiwatari chapter 8 . 2/5/2005
serphant-woman is gone? I thought you would've let her live! Ah...darn you and your oh-so-creative mind...
YO chapter 8 . 8/29/2004
;_; Good bye Young Nazura-chan.
witchesgirl chapter 8 . 4/16/2004
it so sad!*crying* but its also good and very original, too sad ending for me but what could i say? im just a kid... but im sure lots of people enjoyed it i did too very much if i may add(exeption for the end)
Star Girl11 chapter 8 . 1/8/2004
Woah...Good final chapter.
Yuki Tuski chapter 8 . 12/27/2003
Yuki-...did you have to end it so sad?*cries*
April-dont be sad...well the fic. was good and sad...well we must go now...bye...
Rutu chapter 8 . 12/17/2003
THAT CAN'T BE THE END! Wait, that ISN'T the end, is it? PLEASE continue this. . .and soon. BTW, I like your idea about reeviewers making the chapters. Let's see if reviewers get writer's block. . . . . . . . . .
Star Girl11 chapter 8 . 12/17/2003
Poor Nazura! Anyway that was good. Was this the last chapter? Anyway all for now.
PrincessKrystal01 chapter 8 . 12/16/2003
weep its so sad
Yamishadowcat22 chapter 8 . 12/16/2003
that was so sad, did she really die. anyways very good please keep it up
Serah Villiers chapter 8 . 12/16/2003
Nazura...died? That was upsetting, I really thought that Yami and Nazura were going to get toghether. But that was really good! Is that the end? Or is there more? *Hopeful*
Your idea sounds cool, about the reviewers writing the next chapters, you should try it.
Serah Villiers chapter 7 . 12/16/2003
Yugi! Someone go help him! This is great! I like Nazura, she's cool!
Paladin Dragoon chapter 8 . 12/16/2003
It was so sad...;_; Nazura died...But she was a good gal...She didn't have to die...;_; Oh, well, at least they saved Yugi. Great work! But what happened to Yugi's mom? And as for a fic where the reviewers'd write the next chappies...I dunno, really. Before I forget, advance Merry X-Mas! _ *gives you candy*
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