This was nice, but your missing some periods at the end of your sentences.

I like the small comments in-between the actual scene!

Keep writing!

YAY! Dramione!

I really liked this! It's very well written and original. :)

great job _

lol wow that had me going. i thought it would be strange cliche confession of love and it was merely a correction. hahaha i like it. it's typical in character hermione/draco

Nice, very nice.

Ha ha! Thats a good one. He's denying helping her when he did so, bluntly..a little cruelly though...but this is Malfoy so it's probably *nice* considering his reputation with Hermione. Very well written. I really enjoyed this.

TK

i guess Draco can actually be right over Hermione. wow hermione got something wrong for once? j/k but point goes to Draco.

that was cute, and cool, and sweet rolled into one, and i really liked it!

Aw, this was great too. *huggles Draco* I liked this a lot, and the style in which you wrote it was excellent. I really liked how it was sort of choppy, and kept us wondering what exactly Draco was trying to do.

*adds to C2*

brilliant!

It's nice to see a fic that reflects so much that goes on, realistically.

You didn't make Draco some knight in shining armor, nor did you make him evil incarnate, you made him real. With justified actions, and motivation. And Hermione made a mistake, since everybody does. And you caught it, you caught her contradictory behavior and her need to fit it.

Your story was so wonderful. I absolutely loved it. Didn't make me cry like a lot of your other stuff does, (anything that has Draco/Pansy or the Black family just gets to me every time I read it.) But I loved it. Thank you for writing such a great fic.

Wow...I'm being kept happy by your Draco/Hermione ficlets! Keep it up!
Luv, me.

Wee! Hermione gets knocked down a peg or two. Sometimes I think she needs it; she can't go around thinking she's always right. Very nice touch that it just happened to be Malfoy to prove her wrong. ;-D