|Reviews for demons and djinn|
| Innocent Guillotine chapter 2 . 10/5/2004
Niceness. It's funny, how they keep forgeting they don't have arms and stuff...
| LovinShadowtheHedgehog chapter 2 . 1/22/2004
Hey i liked the story! Ü
when do we start going in the story huh..
| 482361 chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
Funny _ I think it could use punctuation though... it's kinda hard to tell when people start and stop talking, etc. And you should make the difference between when people are doing actions and when something happens... Example:
Kuwabra: yea shorty something blue falls out of the sky, followed by a red, brown and a purple one
Those should be separated, because Djinni falling from the sky have nothing to do with Kuwabara making fun of Hiei.
Other than grammar / structure confusion (which isn't that bad anyway) it's really great :)
| LovinShadowtheHedgehog chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
Hey great storie thou funny...
were are you in the storie?
though i'm confusd i only know the yu yu hakusho charater ands shit so yea..