Reviews for Falling |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nice OS I really like how we can see Lily thoughts change |
![]() ![]() This was totally adorable! |
![]() ![]() LOVED IT! The story was kinda confusing in the beginning ngl. BUT the ending and the wat that you added James name and Lily offering to go to the kitchen with James like how he was offering her was a great touch and LOVED THE ATTENTION TO DETAIL. Please do an update about their date! Keep up the good work! Uwu |
![]() ![]() ![]() This. Was. Adorable. I'm grinning like a madwoman. Splendid. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beautiful! I always had a difficult time picturing how they ended up together from the snippet Harry gets from the pensive. This is perfect, thank you! ~Caroline |
![]() ![]() Such a sweet idea for how Lily’s heart began to open to James! |
![]() ![]() James is underrated and Snape is ridiculously overrated. (That's just my opinion and if you don't agree, you are entitled to you own (wrong(just kidding)) opinion. |
![]() ![]() Amazing! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() The snowflake imagery is lovely and very well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS WAS AMAZING. IT WAS PERFECT. I like the fact that they didn't kiss, that it was just the breaking of the ice and her getting comfortable around him. It was written so well and had a lovely feel to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice. |
![]() ![]() Didn't she say herself that if she said that she'd think about it it means yes? HA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() sooo good! Keep it up! I love it! |
![]() ![]() This is literally the best fanfiction I've ever read, and u would not BEILEVE how picky I am when I comes to fanfics or how many of them I've actually read, especially considering this isn't even one of my #1 OTPS. U should become a writer, this is amazing |
![]() ![]() Lovely |