|Reviews for Pointy Shiny Zoids Adventure Romance of DOOM!|
| Requiem17 chapter 5 . 1/30/2013
The most hilarious...comedy...Zoid fic..ever. The battle was actually hugely interesting! And in a weird way the jokes were perfect. And then not to mention the utter laughter I got from all of the intentional parody sections. Loved the parts where the Blitz Team keeps fighting Liger Zoids, Rinon randomly deciding that she loves Bit, Ballad's sudden love, the organoid insertion. Even better: Jamie angsting (he really does get ignored a ridiculous amount of time) and Mach thinking about English!?
My god. Just so much. I would favorite this if Ch. 2 hadn't got messed up somehow, and if Ch. 4 wasn't a repeat of Ch. 1.
| Levells chapter 4 . 7/13/2010
Funny and interesting, I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
This is quite good, you do a great job with the characters and battles.
| Mercenary Pen chapter 5 . 9/17/2004
Slightly CRAZY is the only way to describe the person who wrote this story,but then again its the only way to describe anyone, that's right, everyone's MAD I tell you!
But it takes a "SPECIAL" kind of madness to develop a liger CAS called the Liger Zero Fleecy! (yes, I speak German, no, I didn't know the word straight away, I had to check my dictionary), I have only one thing to say though (so far), the only battle in the entire story which wasn't against a Liger, a Zaber or a Wolf was against the Berserk Fuhrer, tell me that's right someone, 'cause I don't think it is.
Merc pen signing off before I pour out my entire life story again (I hate it when that happens, don't you)- well, you see there was this incident when I was three... only kidding.
| Mercenary Pen chapter 3 . 9/17/2004
Hey, not a bad story...for a humourous one that is.
I've just thought of something- has anyone ever noticed that the Fuzzy Pandas (Tigers Team) always seem to have Command Wolf weapons fitted to their Zabers, I mean its usually a minimum of the twin 50mm rifles, sometimes the 150mm Long range rifle as well (as used by Brad as of I don't know which episode of CC/GF).
The names of the characters you've been referring to as Rinon and Ballad are actually Leena and Brad in the english language version, I don't know if things are different in the Japanese version (and don't speak a word of Japanese in any case) so, for the sake of everyone's sanity, please don't get too inventive.
On the other hand, I like the way you've given them reasonably challenging opponents, few people manage that, but you concentrate too much on using cat and wolf/fox zoids, to the exclusion of other cool types, so if you were to stick in a battle against a team with Gojulas/Deadborder units or something, it would be a lot more balanced.
Merc Pen signing off.
*Merc Pen jumps into his own zoid, a jet black ursine machine with blood-red symbols on it called the Ursazerk, and turned away, his zoid rearing up and roaring a challenge as he departed*
P.S. Ursine is latin for bear-like.
| cap'nyossarian chapter 5 . 2/28/2004
holy crap... this is quite possibly the best zoids story i have ever read... it is perfect. there is absolutely nothing bad i can say about it. frickin awesome.
| yossarian chapter 5 . 1/22/2004
hilarious! i loved it!
| Free Range Snallygaster chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
It's me, DarkSpiner! Nice story... don't tease me like...
"BIT! WHERE ARE YOU, YOU IDIOT?" Wait...she thought. Why am I always so mean to Bit? Is it because I lo-ah!"
...this... you know me! STOP IT!
9/10 though... A story! Check mine out sometime!
| derangedhyena chapter 5 . 12/13/2003
Finally. Finals are over, I can read your finished fic and leave a decent review. 'Tis only polite, since I've enjoyed it so much.. XD
First and foremost, I love the extremes. Cracks me up. xp As you pointed out on ZE, though, what's (sad? amusing? laughable?) is that Fuzors actually employs some of this stuff. LMAO. Everyone loves a Command Wolf of DOOM... XD
Ahem, anyways .. fave parts?
-The psuedo-bizarro-wtf?-onesided romance between Leena and Bit. Everyone loves to see fun poked at the most annoying couple in the whole freaking genre. ;p
-The part with the Gilvader randomly waking up ... and going back to sleep ... *DIED LAUGHING. REALLY, DID* XDXDXD
-The thing with the sleeper Gusak getting up, scuttling into town ... XD
-The pissy Judge. Somehow I can just hear a Judge saying "You want a battle? Fine? Ready, fight. Happy?" in this quippy, annoyed little tone of voice. *snicker/keel* And the way Blitz ended up WINNING that battle, and the Judge's parting comments... *dies*
-Jaime and the angst. xp
-The Blade Liger hogging the good TV. That's ... cute _
And Vega's journal is very amusing :}
There's lots more that I found funny but, it escapes me atm o.o
...oh, and if you wondered, I did laugh at Brad too in the story ... but I personally have such a hard time thinking about him /not/ being a schizophrenic freak, anymore, I could hardly picture him x_X; I ruined my brain..
Very good story overall, though, me-liked. You said that your style changed over the story's course - and yes it did. For the better! Things seemed a bit more organized in latter chapters. You write well. My only 'mechanics' suggestion would be more emphasis on the current speaker. I know it's a pain when there's large groups in the same room ... trying to figure out/label/wtfe who the heck's talking ... argh..
Ohwell, 'tis minor .. fic was good-good-good all around XD as I told you before, reading that part-done draft ... but seeing finished things is always so nice o_o *nodsyes*
Ah .. one last thing ... blaming *me* for evil Shadow Fox? .. tsk ... ;) *evil*
| Koobine chapter 5 . 12/1/2003
Hil-freakin'-larious! I literally split my sides upon reading this story.(My guts are all over the floor. It's very messy!) The sleeper guysak was my favourite part. Very cute!
I'd say more, but I've reviewed this story already on ZE. Keep up the good work!
WRITE A SEQUAL! KOOBINE COMMANDS YOU! _
| Mirai-LD chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
Pretty nice, I really love the diary thing, the description was good too!
| Duki chapter 5 . 11/30/2003
Very nice, as I'm sure I've said sometime before. I already read the non-HTMLied format and I have to say this way it is a lot better.
I like your style. Very witty and interesting.