Reviews for Summer of Despair and Hope
NicoleMargaret chapter 28 . 4/11
I need more!
illymalfoy chapter 27 . 3/29
Great story but This is the end ? Some day You're gone a write a sequel ? please
SinfulPride chapter 6 . 3/18
There a bit too many magic shortcuts. A pencil is too small to transfigure into an entire table. Also, creating an entire new room with working lightning, plumbing, and running water is a serious project, not a casual flick of the wand.
SinfulPride chapter 3 . 3/18
I like the Dumbledoor here. He still seems a bit manipulative (like canon), but he genuinely seems to be a good man and cares about Harry, unlike the vast majority of portrayals out there.
Chaz1302 chapter 8 . 1/27
Ok I'm sorry but i'm done with the story now. A 15yr old asking his friend, yes friend to marry him? How can you go from friends to engaged in the space of a few days?
Chaz1302 chapter 7 . 1/27
There's been too many filler chapters now. I want to see what the plot of the story is or i'm going to have to stop reading
Chaz1302 chapter 6 . 1/27
Great chapter! my interest in your story has grown! A longer chapter, more depth to the story's plot and the 2 main characters, you have written Harry's personality very well, a bit angsty and down but not depressed, and Hermione has improved to the knowledgeable, caring "friend" i know. Very well done. Also love how they're sharing a bed and getting very close
Chaz1302 chapter 4 . 1/27
Having Hermione acting all giddy and like a child when she finds out she's going to see Harry is very uncharacteristic of her (even if she does love him) I hope she isn't like that for the rest of the story
Chaz1302 chapter 5 . 1/27
Loving Dumbledore laying down the law to the Dursley's, even if calling Hermione the most intelligent witch he has met was a bit OTT
Chaz1302 chapter 3 . 1/27
Why would Hermione's parents allow their young daughter go to stay at a house with people who despise people with magic AND allow a 15yr old girl to stay with a teenage boy under no supervision from any adulta? A bit lazy but i'm only pointing out some flaws, i'm going to keep reading to see where plot goes. I noticed how you named Hermione's parents after Emma Watson and Daniel Radcliffe, nice touch
Chaz1302 chapter 2 . 1/27
Very short chapter but a bit of character development to see what state of mind Harry's in. Hoping for longer chapters and more plot in the upcoming chapters
Chaz1302 chapter 1 . 1/27
Decent opening chapter, not got me hooked but intrigued so far, interested to see where you take this story
Guest chapter 8 . 9/14/2016
I am enjoying the story, but the will reads as if Sirius wrote it after his death, as there are things you refer to , to that at the time of writing it, he wouldn't of know we're going to happen, in the way they did.
starlite22 chapter 17 . 9/16/2016
I don't understand how Harry is going to teach DADA to 7 years of stubdents, 4 houses per year. Must glass are doubled up as houses, but they have at least one or two classes per subject a week. That's at least 14-28 lessons a week to teach, how's he going to teach all that and mark there work and attend his other lessons, do his home work and play quiditch? Other that seeming to be impossible I've enjoyed it so far.
keitaropurple69 chapter 28 . 8/12/2016
I really love this story and it is very original, but i was wondering if you were going to write anymore to the story or not?
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