Reviews for His Mistress
ellabelle12 chapter 18 . 5/9
I love stories that involve Hermione exploring her dark side, and I love that you have used passages from the books to explain certain actions. I would love to read the rest of this story! Please please please continue it!
VieVienna chapter 18 . 4/28
I know my first review doesn't have the link thingie to my pen name. Please message me... I hate suspense. I really love this story. I hope you understand!
VieVienna chapter 18 . 4/28
I know I shouldn't be nagging or keeping my hopes high that you would continue this story. But it's just so good and I just need to know the ending. This one of my few favorite fanfics. You truly are a talented author.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21
This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read! I know it has been a very long time since you've updated, but this story is way too unique/creative for it to remain unfinished. Lucius' relationship with Hermione has such an interesting dynamic that you can't help but to keep reading. Is Hermione going to eventually end up being a pureblood? Is her middle name simply a coincidence? Please update as soon as you can!
Sayasy09 chapter 1 . 1/6
I've reread this more than a dozen times and it still doesn't gets old.. It Would be great and it would make me a very happy Cheshire if you atleast update even just one short chappie? Pretty please with naked lucius on top? Dominant/possesive/overprotective/controlling/jealous lucius is certainly my cup of tea ;) i loved it when there was a chapter in the story I think chapter 13 or 14 when Lucius went to the hospital to administer the potion. I love the part where he said how he has to kill Hermione if she betrays him and I love the phrasing "the day you cease to respect me as your superior, the day you defy me or let another touch you –" His eyes flashed with cruelty ready to be unleashed, "– will be the day I kill you." It was simply perfect if I wear to write I would never be able to make it as powerful as you did.. The raw possesiveness in Lucius voice it was just so damn sexy it sent shivers in my neck literally.. Womens lib. Be damned if that man was Lucius personifies then submitting and being dominated will be heaven for me.. No offense I am pro women's rights but what can I say we all have our own fetishes and that my own.. I love how submissive Hermione was and I love the fact how Lucius eyes flashed when he said "let another touch you" hahaha poor rabastan he'll just have to get over his crush f he wants to live im sure Lucius would gladly remove his eyeballs if he ever look at hermione the wrong way and pettigrew would get what's coming for him if ever Lucius heard him preposition hermione.. I'd love to know if hermione will break Lucius out of azkaban and how.. I Also have so many questions I've been itching to be answered like how will she help Lucius rise into power as the next dark lord? Will her plans to break out Lucius be thwarted? Would she be able to achieve her goals before Voldemort finds out her dark secrets of wanting to be the first muggleborn minister? How will they get rid of the threat that is Voldemort? What will voldemort do to Lucius and hermione after they served their purpose? What will bella do if Lucius and hermione successfully replaced voldemort in reigning over the death eaters and the entire magical and muggle population? Will she avenge her master? Would hermione's plan to kill harry work? Would she be able to get fudge's support and get the seat instead of smith? What of draco? How will he react when founds out his father is cheating on him and said mistress is her mother's murderer? So yeah there's plenty more but I don't want to overwhelm you.. But pretty please please update soon? I really really love it it's rare to find a lumione with dark hermione at the same time submissive/complying.. And i hope you don't abandon this story I always get heartbroken if some author abandon his/her story and its a shame because it's usually the good ones that are abandoned :(( so yeah please give me hope ;) and for your writing skills you write like a pro keep it up :)
Booker10 chapter 18 . 11/15/2014
I love this sososososososo much! Please update soon!


Lola.Loves.Me chapter 18 . 8/16/2014
I am in love with this story, I've never come across anything like it and your characterisation of lucius is amazing! I hope you update soon! I can't wait to read more
Lissyh chapter 18 . 7/4/2014
uma palavra, perfeito,sonho de consumo como eles são perfeitos juntos;
como os sentimentos dela evoluiram com tempo e como perfeitos eles são juntos.
ela se deixou ser conquistada plea busca de poder e se tornou cada vez mais escuro.
pois conhecimento é poder e ela tem o poder. Ela buscou o poder. Adoro como eles podem ser das trevas, como ela escolheu todos eles por amor a alguém.
amor a lucius,como elA GOSTA QUE ele é dominante.
eles são perfeitos juntos,adorei que ela se livrou da narcisa e tenho certeza que quando ela tira ele de askaban ela vai se torna nova lady mafoy,senhora malfoy, Hermione Malfoy tenho um som bonito para ela.
adoro a lealdade e capacidade de amor dela por Lucius. Como ela morreria por ele,pobre harry não deveria ter pegado amor dela, foi a gota d'agua para ela. adorei que ela esta traindo ele enfim,bye babaca Pottinho.
esperando ansiosa por mais sei que faz tempo que não escreve aqui mas plis. escreva preciso que escreva necessito de mais
Guest chapter 18 . 6/5/2014
I really love this story. Your dark Hermione is very realistic. But why haven't you written more?
Chris chapter 18 . 5/21/2014
trop bien, dommage que la fic est abandonnée
thelogicallady chapter 18 . 5/19/2014
Such a good story. Love it!
PhoenixflIight chapter 18 . 4/10/2013
I absolutely love this!
UnattainableDarkAngel chapter 18 . 1/19/2013
This story is soo awesome. I wish you could update it
twibe chapter 18 . 1/9/2013
Oh no why haven't you updated in so long!? I have been looking for a story like this for so long ,, i love it !
Paulinha eyva chapter 18 . 10/29/2012
Please continue! I just discovered this fic, and I just hooked it!
It is simply amazing, you are a wonderful author. Continue please!
I'm your fan!
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