Reviews for Beneath It All, Part 2
Anonymous chapter 10 . 8/21/2004
I hope you continue this. It is interesting to explore the consequences of the meddling of alien races.
Galxychld chapter 10 . 5/16/2004
I really like this story arc. I can't wait to see what you come up with for Part I!
canyr12 chapter 10 . 5/10/2004
Fantastic. I confess to getting a little lost with the science, but the storytelling and detail are incredible!
VivianeAeryn chapter 10 . 5/4/2004
(does a happy dance) you update! you updated!
I can't wait to see what Jamie and Mel find,
evitae chapter 6 . 4/29/2004
Great story! Please continue to update.
Galxychld chapter 6 . 4/12/2004
Oh, very good story! Please continue! I'm eagerly waiting to see what happens next!
VivianeAeryn chapter 6 . 4/8/2004
uh-oh. I can't wait for you to update again. Must say it was worth the wait.
egastin77 chapter 3 . 2/7/2004
please write another chpater soon.
I love it so far.
The Blue Raven chapter 3 . 1/10/2004
ah, RL keeps me out of the fanfic loop for a few months and i miss not one but TWO new fics by you... sorry 'bout that. Thus is RL.
This is fascinating so far, both parts. While you picture Cole as a little darker than i do and Mel a little more worldly, your take always keeps me coming back for more :)
In your Part 1, I love Cole's reflections and obvious guilt over what he knows that Mel doesn't. His despair over having to go home and his love for Mel shine through clearly. This first installment alone left me hoping for more, wondering where you were leading...
And the three chapters already up of the second have also left me wondering for more. I love Mel's sadness over Cole's leaving, her absolutely bereft emotional state. And her worry over the same things that Cole was reflecting on in the first part is wonderful. Certainly, knowing what she now knows, she WOULD be very worried about these things.
Also interested to see about this young woman she noticed in the cafe. Will look forward to seeing more on this line
VivianeAeryn chapter 3 . 12/1/2003
I can't wait for the rest.