Reviews for Semla
Stacey's Universe chapter 27 . 9/30/2017
Loving this story and hoping you can do more soon

Stacey's universe
mary small chapter 27 . 1/9/2017
please continue. its my favorite story. i read it about 10 times and allways wonder, if i ever learn what will happen next
Pao chapter 27 . 3/11/2016
Nooo where's the rest of the story? I really want to know how it ends! I was really enjoying it, it's a pity it is left unfinished :(
Guest chapter 27 . 10/5/2015
Please continue
RedTheAbnormal chapter 27 . 4/25/2015
So glad you continued with this story. Has been a while since I first read it, so I did a reread. Love the storyline, and can't wait for the next chapter
guest chapter 27 . 3/9/2015
Aawww i love every bit of it! :-D
Hope you keep it up! :-)

Greetings from Austria ;-)
General Mac chapter 27 . 1/24/2015
Guest chapter 27 . 1/19/2015
Yay I'm glad you are still working on this story! Looking forward to more, hopefully soon!
Stacey's Universe chapter 26 . 1/16/2015
Pleaseplease please do more! I've read this story four times over and always hope that it goes past chapter 26

If its abandoned say it's abandoned... Dont just leave it hanging...

I'm begging you
Eimear chapter 26 . 12/26/2014
Please please pleeeeeeease finish this story it is one of my favourite Sam Carter fics
Guest chapter 25 . 6/30/2014
Keep it up!
sg1star chapter 26 . 4/24/2014
so glad you are adding to this story..
looking forward to finding if girl power will allow sam and janet to escape or if sg1 will rescue them
and you have not lost your writing power
Jaely chapter 25 . 3/30/2014
Yey! I'm glad my review brought the story back up to life for you :) So looking forward to what is to come even if it's only going to be short. :) Until next time!

Sorry had to go back a chapter to review :)
dpdp chapter 26 . 3/30/2014
Very nice. More please.
Jaely chapter 26 . 3/29/2014
I'm enjoying the story and I'm kind of wondering if this story is just a general piece or is it going to be a Sam/Janet pairing at some point in the future?

Sam and Janet figure out how to escape while on the way to where ever the men are taking them or after they get there...
If you want to go darker have Janet be tortured a bit and have Sam rescue her... Again not sure if this a pairing or just the story focuses on them two mostly. (personally I'm a fan of the pairing, but you are that author and it might not be your thing)
If you want them to be captured for a while you can have the tribe and the SG-1 rescue them just in time... but I kind of feel that goes in the opposite direction of the whole "Sam is awesome" theme...
Another dark theme, but kind of tied to the Sam/Janet pairing is that Janet is hurt and Sam goes a bit dark and kills the ones the has hurt Janet and then escapes...
Use the capture as some (admittedly dark) bonding between Sam and Janet, either as friends or to bring them closer to a relationship... (O'Neil kind of hinted that they have one when he talked about Janet needing a bigger house... at least that was how I read it)
You can have them escaping just as the tribe arrives to rescue them... They once more seeing how awesome Sam is as well as Janet... As you can have her fight along side Sam...

That is all I have fore now and it's not for too far in the future because it would have a lot to do with what direction you took the story. I hope I was able to give you some help to get past the block and if you want to brainstorm ideas off of someone I'm more than willing to help out. I love a good Sam/Janet story and though this is not really a solid couple pairing for the two I still found it very interesting to read! Until next time!
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