Reviews for I'm Sure You'll Contract My Disease
tanithlipsky chapter 12 . 1/19/2012
Rori Potter chapter 12 . 9/12/2011
That was brilliant. Update soon.
wolfsrainrules chapter 4 . 9/2/2011
Whats Bright Eyes? A song maybe? By who?

Good job

Last line made me smile again. "Of course I was."
wolfsrainrules chapter 3 . 9/2/2011
That last little bit had me smiling.

"I feel like taking 100 points..." was just so...Snape I laughed.
wolfsrainrules chapter 2 . 9/2/2011

Heartstrings have been pulled.

Though I admit I laughed when Snape was contemplating having MPD.
wolfsrainrules chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Holly Crap.

Well you have caught my attention. Completely.

Is this abandoned? Please say no.
WhiteFang001 chapter 6 . 4/29/2011
What is the name of this poem you put in this chapter?

the jagged end of a saw, thrusts forth

rake her of her insides, throw it out to sea

the insufferable eye of the bark, tree branch break

and fall upon her

break her

(make her complete)

bury me in your dirt, mama

I've disappointed you so, shot straight up to the sky

like a rocket ship superstar

but it was only a daydream

and I'm lying flat on my back, legs wide open

waiting for the vultures to cure their malnourishment

I've failed, mama, I've failed

and I'm walking to the attic

the soft creaks beneath my broken feet

waiting for the floorboards to give way.

Did you write it?

It's soo hauntingly beautiful and sad
WhiteFang001 chapter 5 . 4/29/2011
Just highlinting some of the amazing writing I saw in this chapter:

Thus was the dance of our compassion and we danced it well. Just as novice and awkward and beautiful as it was meant to be; my feet unmoving and his strides jaunty.

Oh my sweet prince, your fury is my motivation; your tears are my humanity.

Severus, you are not going," Albus said. "You're weak!"

Weak. Anemic, debilitated, decrepit, delicate, effete, exhausted, faint, feeble, flaccid, flimsy, forceless, fragile, frail, hesitant, impotent, impuissant, infirm, insubstantial, irresolute, lackadaisical, languid, languorous, limp, powerless, puny, rickety, rocky, rotten, senile, shaky, sickly, sluggish, spent, spindly, supine, tender, torpid, uncertain, undependable, unsound, unsteady, unsubstantial, wasted, wavering.

I, Severus Snape, refuse to be called weak ever again.

"Take care of Harry for me," I repeated, leaning down to gently disentangle the boy from my leg. "I'll be back later tonight."

I swept away, leaving my charge just as I had found him, broken and crying.
WhiteFang001 chapter 4 . 4/29/2011
I love this fanfiction -

a couple of parts really stood out in this chapter where I must applaud your fantastic writing:

I love the part especially where you say that everythings been paper-thin lately; even me.

I also love where you describe him as his dreams tearing him apart.

Please continue the great work!
WhiteFang001 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
wow - this chapter really worked

Lovely writing - its brilliant
Darklight-phoenix chapter 12 . 4/5/2011
errrrr? update? hope not abandoned
Griffin Raven chapter 12 . 4/28/2010
Wow...its totally amazing just how similar both Harry and Severus are in personality, there childhood. Yet despite being pushed away by Severus, Harry still compassionate to come back to Severus. I think Harry realizes that Severus uses his sharp witted tongue to push people away...because of how many times he's been hurt by others.
Periwinkle Kitty chapter 12 . 2/9/2010
If you don't update soon, your gruesome death will occur at my willing hands.
IchigoRenji chapter 12 . 11/17/2009
Love this story, keep up the great work _
lastcrazyhorn chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
All Hail Severus! Love the mental visuals. :)
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