Reviews for Two Hitokiri
naatyy chapter 16 . 4/9/2014
It was sad, it was beautiful... Thank you for this story.
Dawn20p chapter 16 . 12/3/2011
I liked the idea of the story, but it turned out to be to "Mary Sueish" for my liking... I'm in favor of strong woman characters, but the story is called rurouni KENSHIN, and you make him weaker and second best after her... and that's a no no!

and that ending...sight..
Aihsatan-Ellimac chapter 16 . 9/4/2010
No wonder this has so much reviews..

I was just sadden by the ending, they didn't had children and kaoru can't walk anymore..

but as they always say life is not perfect..

I loved the sadness that it portrayed, it foretells the reality of life..

Thank you for sharing..

Kindly write more...

Brukaoru chapter 16 . 9/7/2009
Great story. I love the portrayal of Kaoru, though her action's are out of character, the way you describe them make it very believable. :D Great fic!
noname00 chapter 16 . 1/30/2007
no was a sweet yet sad ending i really did enjoy your fic it was just i can't think of a word but this fic kept me at the edge of my seat especially when i thought kenshin might die if he did i was thinkin about flaming u hehe glad that didn't happen but yeah nice fic
noname00 chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
so far wow

i just can't wait to continue this fic and to think i almost went lookin for some comedy so glad i didn't
ELLIE 31773 chapter 16 . 2/16/2006
nice story inded. I love it very much but not the part of the kaoru cant walk. Ok jana, see you
Tari Mack chapter 16 . 12/3/2005
I know there can't be a sugary ending but... paralysis?... Oh well, it was still a pimpin' fanfiction. Good job buddy boy (or is it buddy girl?)
Tari Mack chapter 12 . 12/3/2005
waff yes, but even sweeter still
Tari Mack chapter 9 . 12/3/2005
and that, my friend, is really why i don't read uncompleted fanficitons
Tari Mack chapter 8 . 12/3/2005
And the end of this chapter, my friend, is why I don't read uncompleted fanfictions.
Tari Mack chapter 5 . 12/3/2005
so sweet at the end... I wish Kenshin would hold me like that...
Tari Mack chapter 4 . 12/3/2005
THat's what he ggets, that fatty Hachiro!
Tari Mack chapter 3 . 12/3/2005
dude, you're a good writer. Nice plot buddy, props.
Tari Mack chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
that... was... awesome...
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