It was sad, it was beautiful... Thank you for this story.

I liked the idea of the story, but it turned out to be to "Mary Sueish" for my liking... I'm in favor of strong woman characters, but the story is called rurouni KENSHIN, and you make him weaker and second best after her... and that's a no no!

and that ending...sight..

No wonder this has so much reviews..

I was just sadden by the ending, they didn't had children and kaoru can't walk anymore..

but as they always say life is not perfect..

I loved the sadness that it portrayed, it foretells the reality of life..

Thank you for sharing..

Kindly write more...

A.E.

Great story. I love the portrayal of Kaoru, though her action's are out of character, the way you describe them make it very believable. :D Great fic!

no kenji...it was a sweet yet sad ending i really did enjoy your fic it was just so...um i can't think of a word but this fic kept me at the edge of my seat especially when i thought kenshin might die if he did i was thinkin about flaming u hehe glad that didn't happen but yeah nice fic

so far wow

i just can't wait to continue this fic and to think i almost went lookin for some comedy instead...im so glad i didn't

nice story inded. I love it very much but not the part of the kaoru cant walk. Ok jana, see you

I know there can't be a sugary ending but... paralysis?... Oh well, it was still a pimpin' fanfiction. Good job buddy boy (or is it buddy girl?)

waff yes, but even sweeter still

and that, my friend, is really why i don't read uncompleted fanficitons

And the end of this chapter, my friend, is why I don't read uncompleted fanfictions.

so sweet at the end... I wish Kenshin would hold me like that...

THat's what he ggets, that fatty Hachiro!

dude, you're a good writer. Nice plot buddy, props.

that... was... awesome...