|Reviews for Stop Living The Lie|
| Bad Ass Mutha Fucka chapter 4 . 4/19/2007
nice ... that's all i have to say ... nice ... i love Chris/Jill pairings ... it's on my profile if you want to read ... read the sequel too ... it's good ... i just don't see why you make Rebecca a total bitch ... other than that both are great ... keep it up Kiwi
| Amara the Warrior chapter 4 . 8/14/2004
It's cute...I read the sequel to this and it blew me away!
| Muap muap muap chapter 2 . 4/7/2004
Erlack! Sounded good until RebecaCarlos together popped up. Rebecca and Billy are the real deal, you fool! :I And Rebecca wouldn't act like some dumb mean whore. I read it for the sake of the fact its a fanfic. Its okay. But nononononono. xI
| Skysoldier chapter 4 . 3/29/2004
As a guy who really could use something siilar in his own life this is pretty Rad. Just what I was looking for. something short from which I could derive hope. Good, I'm proud.
| Shakahnna chapter 4 . 12/30/2003
That was a totally great ending though. Like everything totally finished off nicely and Carlos got what he deserved for how he acted. Definitely didn't deserve a second chance. Him having the safety on his gun and Jill talking down to him. That was swell!
| Shakahnna chapter 3 . 12/30/2003
This is totally just the ideal little fic-let to be reading during a coffee break or lunch time cause it's a complete story and cool to read but short enough to read at work.
And Chris and Jill meeting up was SO cute. Like it was dead sweet. And her being just tall enough to kiss him was SO romantic.
| Shakahnna chapter 2 . 12/30/2003
Oh oh oh and Jill going to starbucks and Chris is already there. Definitely a really nice touch.
Rebecca is such a complete b* like how she acted towards someone who had been so good to her was just completely ridiculous. She obviously has no loyalty at all.
| Shakahnna chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
Chris is really swell here like you can tell how totally torn up and full of regret he is. Just wishing that he could change the past. Is ashame like he comes over just not complete. But is all hidden cause of how he has to act.
*squeal squeal* Thank you much for the review! Decided to come back and re-read some of the old stuff here :)
| peanutbuttersunshine chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
Sorry, mate, but I have no idea who David Snedon is. Although if that shockingly awful little excerpt is anything to go by then he has about as much talent as a lyricist as you do a writer.
Chris sat alone in Starbucks. Was he mourning the loss of his testicles, since you've removed all traces of masculinity from him?
| Spider-bear chapter 4 . 12/11/2003
what? that's the end? NO! i wanna know what happens next! heh heh...stupid carlos! like ANYBODY cares! lol! good story and the format was fine..i don't give a crap about it! all that matters was that chris and jill are together and carlos got his ass kicked! _ but you MUST write a sequel!
| Penitence Redefined chapter 3 . 12/9/2003
I think this is pretty good. Keep going. As some of the other authors have already said, ignore Mr. Madison's comments. He talks a lot of shit for a guy that has yet to author a fic here. Wonder if he can even write? Joker
| janey's got a gun chapter 3 . 12/9/2003
They finally meet. Great! Love this chapter. Hmm, I wonder what's going to happen with Carlos, that jackass. Anyways, keep it up. Sorry I didnt review the last chapter, been really busy. Yeah so, um, update soon! _
| VinMoore19 chapter 3 . 12/9/2003
You have no idea how long i have waited to read or see or whatever the scene where chris and jill hook up, great job i'm looking forward to reading what is next.
| Spider-bear chapter 3 . 12/9/2003
yey! they're together now! oh no...CARLOS! he is DEFINATELY going to get his horny ass handed to him! heh heh heh...lets just hope for his sake that he umm...yeah! i forgot what i was gonna say and yes! i agree about mr. madison! update soon!
| In Simple Terms chapter 3 . 12/9/2003
Great story, and honestly, don't worry about Mr. Madison. He's a fruitcake. He also doesn't have enough sense to consult a dictionary for synonyms to the word useless... I beleieve it's the only word he knows besides idiotic. Anyways, keep it up. I really like this one! O