Reviews for Leela Squared |
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![]() ![]() I love Futurama and Dr. Who. Are you ever going to continue the story, or is this the end? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good cliffhanger. I liked the references to the Who episodes, especially "Nothing will happen to you...ever." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was a good chapter. And a lot has happened. First the Cybermen had to learn how powerful and mighty the Toymaker really is, and how he tortured those Cybermen was really cruel. Even if he claimed that he's only interested in games it does not justify his actions. They're by no means harmless, and that creature needs to be put into a pocket-dimension from which he can't escape. That Fry and Leela went down as fast as that was unsurprising considering the might of the toymaker. But what the doctor did was a stroke of genius. He knew that the toymaker wanted him, and only him, and although it looks as if he's dead I'm quite certain that the mysterious woman will bring him back after their dance. My guess is that she is Lady Death, and that she actually only keeps him dead for the duration of the dance. I only hope that the toymaker won't harm Fry and the two Leelas. Good chapter, update when you can. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The suspense is killing me! Where's the next chapter? Where? |
![]() ![]() ![]() How did the Doctor avoid getting his mind wiped? I know what "isomorphic" means, but your application of the word here isn't quite clear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh-oh, Nibbler is evil. Or is he? You may want to reformat this story, as the ellipses (...) have been changed into single periods. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only six reviews so far? That's just criminal. This is a great story, but I don't see why the dialogue needs to be in script format. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good chapter. I liked the continued history on both the doctor and the doctors Leela. There also seems to be a lot of history between the doctor and this Kronos. I hope this will be explained later (contrary to the doctors wishes). The Cybermen remind me somewhat of the Borg, although the concept of their race is different. I'm curious to see if they'll actually help the doctor and our heroes, as they too have been screwed over by the Toymaker. It is good to see that you're motivated to write once more. Update when you can. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again a great chapter. It is good to see that the doctor seems to be immune to Nibblers psychic powers and that he managed to make Nibbler see reason. You also did a good job on the background of the doctors Leela. So the missile was only a bait, huh? But at least the doc and Fry managed to disarm it. I have the suspicion that the missile was sent by the Daleks to get their revenge. Good job, update when you can. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a good chapter. Good background story on the doctor (I just love the Doc Who series!), and also on the technological details. And finally Fry learns that Nibbler is much more than he thought. I hope this knowledge won't come at the price that it seems. Nibbler, as an Eternian should recognize that Fry's wishes are more important than anything else, and that keeping him safe like an exhibit in a copied world would be not the same. I hope the doctor can resist Nibblers attack. Good job, reading on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting. That's actually the first time I read a Futurama fanfic (have always watched the show, though). Good idea with the Time Lord and while his fellow Gallifreyans allow him to continue his interferences. So it seems that Fry is the apparent future saviour of the universe, huh? I'm curious to see what the danger to the universe could be and will read more once I have the time. One suggestion though: you shouldn't write the dialogues in script-form. Its better for the story if you write them like in book-form. Otherwise really good work and very creative. Trugeta. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have no idea about the time lord stuff, but that was really COOL! who are those people and y havn't u UPDATED! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it, it was cool reading a different crossover for once. looking forward in reading what happens next. I'm still doing part 3 of my story, but it will be completed eventually |