Reviews for Naruto no Hohoemi
Nyree Olivia Chachi chapter 46 . 9/22
Hmmmmm...I feel...bland and blank like storys not bad but it's not insanely good either.
Nako13yeh chapter 54 . 9/4
i have to drop it at this. There's not much plot going on. Just them screwing and being dense as ever. And not much character progression. And the use of japanese words, like "demo" for "but" or "daijobu" for "are you okay" is a bit irritating. To have it constantly in nearly all the chapters is hard to read. And the fact that the plot isn't at all there, the character development is near non-existent. I liked some of the story, you did great with the level of angst and the moments with Sasuke and Naruto, but the sudden "KABOOM" mini-plots were just not that good. Like, Iruka for a hardcore mission while Shikamaru fills in his spot at the academy, that's just not right. Iruka may be smart, but he's not that good. And the fact that Tsunade was led on by the Kitsune's mother? that was just a weird part of the story just for you to unleash the Kyuubi and get Naruto to become a ghost like figure just to tease Sasuke into getting turned on and realizing his feelings. I mean, it's fun, sure... but it was just a bit too much? I guess...

But you've done a great job anyways.. so Good luck if you ever continue this! Just fix up the japanese thing and get a decent plot going and you'll be good!
Nako13yeh chapter 53 . 9/4
Knew it. xD You should change the description to "NaruSasu" instead of "SasuNaru" If Naruto's the Seme, then yep, NaruSasu it's supposed to be. A little misleading and that it took about 50 chapters to get this far. Like wow...
Nako13yeh chapter 52 . 9/4
It confuses me if it's SasuNaru or NaruSasu xD I prefer SasuNaru, but what the hell... we can't have everything. The description though... it needed more info on what we're actually getting. And is Sakura not the student of Tsunde? Just a question. She's such a fangirl still... and Naruto is confusing to be honest. xD I wouldn't say otherwise if I hadn't made it this far, I wanted to know about SasuNaru... but anyways, if Naruto has been raped it should have made an impact on him, or if he'd been tortured. It would eventually surface one way or another, not just from nightmares. It's so casual... Like... The mentality of it is just not there. And they're 18 right? where are the Akatsuki, and why are they still a bit weak. I know the major changes were because Sasuke was brought back, but for Sasuke to actually be still lame with his jutsu, that's not right.
Nako13yeh chapter 34 . 9/3
You kinda lost me with that "Kyuubi's Mother" thing going on. And that she took on a woman form and wants to leave with Naruto... like... that's weird.
jupimako chapter 64 . 5/8
Quite the emotional rollercoaster. I liked it!
japanese words chapter 2 . 4/28
I know your trying to make this as real as possible but...the japanese do not use:

"Demo" for "but" all the time.

Also if you are going to use these words please...I beg you do not use them ALL the time! Every so oftebbis fine but we get the fact that it's supposed to be set in Japan.
hopelessfreakz chapter 64 . 6/24/2014
Why discontinued?!
Please... u must update this again.
I hope u will change your mind. TAT
Gemini.Rose12 chapter 50 . 4/28/2014
Ahh! When Sasuke said those words to Naruto I wanted to shake him and say "Open your damn eyes fool!", I've been reading this story non stop and I just had to comment before I got to the end. I see your going slow into their relationship and I love that because I don't see it happening in a lot of stories and it's a way to see a relationship build up.

Though I am not happy about Garra being the "bad guy", but I guess someone had to...I feel bad for Naruto, poor thing is going through a lot and he just needs someone... yeah he has Sasuke, but that fool won't open his eyes! I'm not liking the whole using me for a stress reliever, but if it's Naruto to open his head and see what he has and finally sees that he just needs Sasuke.

Back to reading more and can't wait to see what happens next!
CrimsonEyedKitsune chapter 64 . 1/20/2014
I am seriously in love with this story! you are a great writer and you have great ideas that I couldn't even imagined!
XxSilverXTearsxX chapter 64 . 12/17/2013
I hope you decide to continue this story so much better than most stories I have read and I'm absolutely in love with it! If you do continue please let me know, I can even betta for you if you want. Please please continue the story at somepoint.
Guest chapter 64 . 12/7/2013
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Guest chapter 64 . 12/7/2013
Guest chapter 64 . 12/7/2013
You have to finish this story! I need to know how it ends! If you need someone to beta for you, here is my email:

Please keep writing this is the one of the BEST stories I have ever read!
Laughless chapter 24 . 10/16/2013
I'm pretty sure this is my favorite chapter. ::;;)
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