|Reviews for Oh,what a lovely day|
| Mad Hatter Lover chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
plz contiune I love the Mad Hatter and wish that people would write more stories on him
| al chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
this is a good beginning and im looking forward to reading the next chapters. keep up the good work.
| loppears chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
it's a wonderful chapter please finish the story.
| Fiona Fargazer chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
I like your beginning. I love the idea of the little girl, Catherine. I hope she'll be okay. I wonder what the Mad Hatter is going to do with her. I shudder at the thought. Please write more soon. This is really good.
| Fate8 chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
It's a good premise. I am interested in exactly what the Hatter has in store for the girl. Is he going to help her or turn her to some evil use? And why is she still alive?
You might want to watch your sentence structure, it was a bit loose at times. Also watch your verb tenses. Most of the story was in the present tense, but some past tenses slipped in there.
But, way to let your dark side show through on the atack in the park. Pretty brutal. I wonder if the violence, and the death of her parents, will have some lingering effect on Catherine.
Keep writing. This has potential.