|Reviews for Amber|
| Il'Diko chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
My first Ewerwood fic, loved it! I saw Ewerwood 4-5 years ago, I don't know? I was in high school... so that must be... um 8-9 years ago? :O But I remember the mood of it... and brought that so well back. I don't know why, but I was mesmerised with that show, it captured me. The human tragedies, the various relationships it handled... you too wrote about them brilliantly!
And you captured Ephram and Amy VERY well, they were spot on!
I loved this line, beacuse it captures Ephram so well and it describes their relationship perfectly:
"her constant, the one who does all these things for her and will never get the appreciation he deserves, and bores him to death with sad sob stories"
Really awsome, I'm favoriting it and adding you to my alerts!
Thanks for sharing!
| BehrBeMine chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
I can see why you get so many reviews, while I am lacking in that area.
"She retaliated and pretended to punch him in the arm. He pretended like it hurt. She pretended like he wasn't the most incredible person she had ever met."
| thefastlane chapter 1 . 12/26/2003
All I can say...wow. It's been so long since I've read any of you fanfics, and I am so glad I finally got around to it. Your words always flow so beautifully; you have a graceful way of piecing them together, a quality that boasts the difference between good writer and gret writer. My favorite line was "She retaliated and pretended to punch him in the arm. He pretended like it hurt. She pretended like he wasn't the most incredible person she had ever met." Lines like that are absolutely incredible, the way they bring together two ideas and essentially describe the entire story, which you definitely have a knack for. Never stop writing :)
| Kiera Kay chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
I love this story...it seems so real like ur rite there with them! you have to write so more! i wanna kno wat happens next. Keep wrting
| magicwillow261 chapter 1 . 12/12/2003
Hey, this is really good. Are there going to be any more chapters? I hope so. You have a good thing going here! Hope to see more!
| nsyncfan333 chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
is that it? or will u update?
| critic 121 chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
Your writing never ceases to amaze me, Ditey. Your recent lack of writing had me worried, but stories like this just prove that you've still got it! Never stop, because your writing should stand as a romodel for the other Everwood fanfic writers out there.
| cw chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
Great story...I didn't watch the episode, so maybe they called it a "Code Amber" in it, but usally it's an "Amber Alert".
I love the way you run through Amy's transformation in her head, using her clothing and demeanor changes to transmit the image of a completely different person.
| girl 0 chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
Was this a one-shot thing? Cause it's very good!
| Elle Mira chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
That was beautiful, Ditey. I love the way your writing just flows from one sentence to the next instead of being choppy-it comes out magnificent. I miss the old, classic Ephram-and-Amy moments from Season One, and apparently their relationship has vanished into thin air. (Madison and Tommy should die. Long painful deaths. Okay, that'd be mean. But they should go away. Far away.)
I've been in a block too. I've written three ficlets, but I'm too chicken to post them; I'm not sure they're that good. Anyway, I'm glad to see you're back. This is going on my favorites list.
Oh, and lovely ending. Bittersweet and eerie and TOTALLY awesome.
| badkittie937 chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
DUDE! THAT WAS SO GOOD! I almost cried! They stopped running Everwood for a bit, so I need something to get me through.
That was so good!
That could be a real episode. Better than some of the actual episodes!
| MariCareBear chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
Awesome! As usual!
| cowgirl1208 chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
HEY I WAS WONDERING IF U WERE IGNORING WHAT HAPPNED BETWEN EHPRAM AND MADISON OR IS THAT WHY HE DIDNT SAY I LOVE U 2 BECAUSE HE WAS IN LOVE WITH MADISON I WAS JUST WONDERING
| Prudence the Rushmore Yankee chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
Very nice, you captured the characterazitions excellently. The story was heartfelt and realistic, and Amy's thought patterns were especially superb. Cheers!
| Blank Account chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
I just went through a thesaurus of emotions because you see everything that you wrote I could almost feel. Blind numbness, flickering warmth, and then that barely there glimmer of hope at the end. You amaze me.
My favorite line: "So you ran up to your room, and the more you thought about it, the more appealing the darkness outside your window was. So you climbed out. You ran away." This was a close second to the whole hand on the knee thing.
The last scene - and scene is the world for it because I saw it all clearly in my mind - was eloquently written. The way Amy went to Ephram when she was in trouble was true to character. The way Ephram accepted her and offered what he could despite his own bitterness was even more perfect. Amy's spontaneous confession at the end played well into it, but far better was Ephram's response.
It was amazing and didn't mention Madison once. I'd ask you to run away with me to Vermont, but I think that might set off the milk cartoon radar.