|Reviews for Make Him Move On|
| Black Wolf-Dog chapter 30 . 5/21/2007
i totally loved this story! can't wait for the sequal!
| SparrowMuse chapter 30 . 5/21/2007
I absolutely agree with you, piewacket's diction is amazing. You've done a wonderful job with this, and the ending is soo evil! You left me ready for the sequel. I know I promised to read the rest of your stuff and review, and I will, I never break my promises, but I've been so busy with college and the classes that I give to kids... but one of these days I'm gonna saturate your email with my reviews.
Bye bye birdie! See you soon I hope (or read, wathever... you know what I mean ).
| The DuTchess of Doom chapter 30 . 5/21/2007
Oh my...what a sad ending. So the pirate in Jack won this time. But somehow I don't think he'll be able to forget about June. She got under his skin and I don't think he'll like it very much, but his concience might not completly agree with his actions. Right?
I just keep picturing June in her 10-button dress answering James Norrington with 'This better fucking be worth it' I do think he might have chocked on his own saliva jus ta bit. LOL He should know he can't change June when she doesn't want to be changed. But maybe she'll decide to change now that Jacks gone... I hope not though.. she kicks too much ass to be put in a passive role.
Oh I loved this story and I can't wait for the sequel.
And thanx for your sweet remarks and I might take you up on that offer at some point in time ;-)
Hugs from Holland,
| CharlieBlackNails chapter 30 . 5/21/2007
Oh my. Endings are always so sad and final, aren't they? But with the hope of another just on the horizon, I feel I may survive. MAY. Besides, it is 4 DAYS TILL AT WORLD'S END! Hope you're coping with the excitement better than I am.
Anyways, lovely as always, and congrats on finishing it. Gotta dig that feeling of accomplishment, eh? Well, till next time, keep writing and I'll keep reading!
PS: Very interested in these silly scones. They sound yummy.
PSS: Thanks for the shout-out to PH at the end! We appreciate it!
| Tora chapter 30 . 5/21/2007
mih goodness...it's been a super long time since I've been on fanfic, and so much has happened...goodness...I think I've got to go cry for June now though...
but what a sad figure she makes! it'll be all the gossip among pirates and socialites alike.."oh yes, the poor dear...gave up the pirate life because the only man she ever loved abandoned her and stole her map. but it wasn't really her map you know..." and on it goes. they could make an emo-punk song about her...
| sparrow's strumpet chapter 30 . 5/20/2007
Ohh God Almighty! It's a cliffhanger ending! Ohh this is just how I felt at the end of Dead Man's Chest. Well, at least the third one comes out in a couple of days.. Anyway... This is one of my favorite fics of all time! And along with MHM and TWTD, it's my favorite PotC fic EVER! heh. Just love what you've done with it.. and I honestly can't wait for more. It's been a pleasure reading your work.
| Kait chapter 30 . 5/20/2007
Excellence, yet again. Stupid Jack, though, running away like that. And I don't like that Kade fellow, very much. It's all his fault. Really, it is. Ana and Will make me giggle to no ends. You'll have to go more in depth with their exchanges of spit, though. lol. That's all for now. Ta!
| SparrowsVixon chapter 30 . 5/20/2007
oh yes, dear, i cant wait for the sequel! whens it coming?
| Pirate Gyrl chapter 30 . 5/20/2007
what a wonderful chapter! it was absolutely fantabulous! and of course jack would leave, but hopefully he'll grow a conscience and come back. or maybe he'll find the treasure and go to find her and do something. he really is a boob. but, we can't expect much more from our loving captain!
you're going to summer classes? that's understandable. i decided to skip summer. i started a new job and needed time to settle there. i hope you enjoy classes!
your loving reviewer,
ps. potc comes out in 4 days! 4 days! i can't wait! i will so be there, dressed up and ready to go!
| 123pEnpEn123 chapter 29 . 5/19/2007
i love this story please update soon i cant wait till the nxt chapter
| Anastasia Kaliska Dyani Malfoy chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
Nice choice in name for the girl. Since it's mine and all and this is a good story nonetheless I really love this fic.
| Edie'sGarage chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
Before I begin this, I just want to say that I am a crap reviewer, but I thought you'd appreciate the following thought:
I LOVE THIS STORY.
| The DuTchess of Doom chapter 29 . 5/6/2007
Damn! I totally missed your update for some strange reason. But I LOVED this chapter. Ana and Will finally let out their raging hormones. Cheers to Ana for finally showing him she really can be everything he longed for! And Jack...torn in side. The gentleman and the pirate are dueling inside. Interesting to see which side of him wil prevail, probably the latter come to think of it... And that line of his “Will men who are almost as handsome as me STOP ENTERING THE BLOODY ROOM?”
Hilarious! But it pains me to read that this enchanting and captivating tale is almost over? *sobs* But.. a sequel... yay! Can't wait! But please, I beg of you... UPDATE ASAP!
| mandy chapter 29 . 5/5/2007
OMG I love your story! The whole thing is awesome! Nothing needs to be changed about it! It is so good! Your story is the only story on fan fiction that I've read all 29 chapters... and actually I read it a while ago and I was waiting for you to make more and I love the last 3 chapters! Please don't stop making this! MAKE MORE! :D
| Vixter chapter 29 . 5/2/2007
Once again another amazing chapter.
What the heck else is new?
Then again,who am I to complain?
Can't wait for the next update!