Reviews for Strangled Whispers
MichaelJackson'sGirl chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
Very creepy... I like it but what would make it even scarier was if someone was reading it in complete darkness and whispering it, very good job!
Gijinka Renamon chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
C . . .
Waifu chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
This is ought to write books!_
anita chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
Good spook fic!
darkdragon207 chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
Wow! This fic is SO dark and depressing, but that is a GOOD thing. I could "hear" and "feel" your tone within your poem. PERSONAL examples of writers who did the same thing include Edgar Allen Poe, Mary Shelley, Corrie ten Boom, etc. I can't pick out any mistakes, but I'm a LITTLE confused by the beginning when you wrote 'of the betrayed'. You could probably make that just a little bit clear. Apart from that, your fic was EXCELLENT! Spelling and grammar were 100% correct!:D
Good Luck
MarcFan chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
Yay Samara-Chan! _