i bawled my eyes out through this, it was BEAUTIFUL thank you

Well, same thing here as the Touched one: Way to make things different. It's so cool how you can make something that's already set into something else. Very nice. )

Thank you! (This is said with a big exclamation and a sigh in the end).

Finally someone who agrees that Angel is wrong for our Slayer in so many ways, on so many planes. I mean I didn't like him even before there was Spike.

But you really need to work on a sequel, ever since the end of "Not Fade Away" I've been reading reunion story's, but none of them seem to happen like they would on show.

Just think about it.

ARGH! I've been missing from the fanfic circus for some time now, hm...since you finished Cradle:) This was nice. It gave some closure that Joss failed to deliver. And yes, the novel was utter poop. I mean, spelling errors? Come on. This was SUPERB as usual! I would love to devilishly indulge in a fluff/angst sequel to this and you know it! Good work!
-FL-

I loved it! The only thing is that SPIKE SHOULD NOT HAVE DIED! I know that is the way it is, but why? WHY? After all thy have been through, it just doesn't seem right. They would make such a perfect couple. Plus, I think Spike would make a wonderful father. The way he held Buffy in "Touched." Think about it. Well, anyway, wonderful. Hope you come out with more!

Well done. It is a simple comment but I tell you its true. This has no doubtly been the best fanfic I have read at . I really love the way you put the counterpoints for touched and chosen. To tell you the truth, i have been wondering waht happened in those missing scenes and looking for a fanfic that concerned that matter. I have found it and it was GREAT! I love the way you write. It isn't the poor story writing i have been reading at for a long time, It is artistic and sophisticated. Very good use of words. I hope you will continue writting (hopefully more B/S) and i will read your storys. I would like to nominate you for the Spuffy awards. Tell me if thats alright with you.
Finally i would like to BEG you to write the counter for end of days! PLEASE!
Bloody Brilliant!
BAICANCOOK

I loved this little short story. It was really well written and I enjoyed. I'm an anti B/A fan as well. I know how u feel. Too bad Joss couldn't just make B/S fans happy.

Cool! New chapter already. Sorry I gave you a hard time about he achatter in the background but it was more needed in this one and it fits perfectly.
Oh, the house she broke into? That clears that up. But... what did she say? I need to watch my tapes again (yes I did tape it) but all I heard was the song by Heather Nova and- oh, do you mean the conversation or something in it? WHAT DO YOU MEAN? Why did Spike think he was dreaming? Jeez.
Update!

I really like this fic. It's very well written. UPDATE!

Updates good, sequels good, have spoken, please post soon no matter HOW angsty it is!

This is so wonderfully well written. I love reading it! Update soon please xoxox

i want more, i love it, i 've been reading a lot of this Chosen fics and i think yours is over the top. please udate soon!

Aw! Much fluffiness! I like!

I look forward to more.

Want the final part now! hehe.