Reviews for A Snipers Magic Bullet
annonymous gundam chapter 9 . 3/7/2004
hey, i am glad you are back from your trip, i
just read chapter nine, and loved it, cant wait
for chapter ten to be posted. you are a great writer, and i love your stories. (lol) so please,
please, please, please, (oh getting carried away)
*sorry* anyway before i make a complete fool of
my self, keep up the good work, and like always
i will continue to read and review.*_*
-annonymous gundam
ColREHogan chapter 9 . 3/5/2004
Hey, I don't mind you taking time with your chapters. You still get them out faster than I do. Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter. Schwarz and Cloy are really getting into things, aren't they? I'll be interested to see what happens next.
The Four Random Ones chapter 8 . 2/12/2004
SC-0612: *laughs* Aha...Dakota is a vengeful little demon. I officially like this guy. ‘But it wasn’t, I… he was in pain after you disappeared out of his life.’ *sniffles* Poor Schwarz...*coughs* I'm repeating myself again...anyway, his heart could be pure and broken at the same time...take a look at Domon in the last arc...
Lovely. Schwarz is getting PG-13 on me again.I think I'm going to be sick. Not that it isn't, eh, well-written. I've just gotta get used to Schwarz what he usually is.
‘Who were you expecting? Hitler?’ *laughs* I always was a fan of the idea that Kyoji and Schwarz were connected telepathically.
“During the Final Battle.
The Four Random Ones chapter 7 . 2/12/2004
SC: "Besides, I wouldn’t want it to because men can be such babes when sick." *laughs* Ain't it the truth? Although...I really wouldn't mind pampering Schwarz..."Schwarz clamped his mouth shut and shook his head. She tried seeing if she could get the spoon in but to no avail." I -still- wouldn't mind pampering Schwarz...EEk. *rereads* I guess Cloy doesn't mind pampering Schwarz, either. Why is he still tied to the couch? That is...worrisome. This is Schwarz we're talking about. He usually doesn't go above a PG rating."I wonder what his insides look like." We already know what his insides look like, Mister Demon.
The Four Random Ones chapter 6 . 2/12/2004
SC-0612: SC is confuzzled again..."This is going to be quite hard to explain… but… long ago when Cloy was still a young girl she had a demon sprit inserted into her soul. That would be me." How very...un-G Gundamish...unusual...I always wanted to see how Schwarz would handle a 30-year-old dead demon trapped inside his girlfriend's body. *thinks* As much as this Koga fellow tries to explain this, I am still very confused...
The Four Random Ones chapter 5 . 2/12/2004
SC: AAh! I hate cliffhangers! No fair-oh. Chapter Six is already up. Never mind. *rereads* His WHAT side? Oh, I SO did not need to know that...*shudders* Bad, bad images...
The Four Random Ones chapter 4 . 2/12/2004
SC: "I’m a demon wolf, remember?" *coughs* Well, actually, no, I didn't...And "And the last thing he told her was how he was training Domon to beat the dark gundam by killing him and Kyoji to do it and how it had to stay secret to him."? He had that planned? *sighs* I -knew- he had suicidal tendancies. “Another reason Kyoji didn’t want me telling you was that he was afraid you wouldn’t love him anymore.
The Four Random Ones chapter 3 . 2/12/2004
SC: Hn...He's worrying me again...*whimpers* My poor Schwarz...
The Four Random Ones chapter 2 . 2/12/2004
SC: *sighs* You know, I really hate it when Schwarz is something other than his usual calm, unflappable self, but I can deal with the unexpected show of emotions. And I can tolerate the rather irritating switch of names from Schwarz to Kyoji. But..."But instead he was in this prison like boot camp where he was beaten and made to use his knowledge to build gundams for evil." Now, I hate blaming the Dark Gundam thing on Kyoji or Dr. Kasshu, but no one forced them to build it. And it wasn't originally built to be evil. I'm disappointed; I assumed you already knew that.
The Four Random Ones chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
SC-0612: I've never read this? *sighs* Wow...I really HAVE been offline for too long...
ColREHogan chapter 8 . 2/11/2004
I like the idea of Schwarz's transformation. Keep it up!
annonymous gundam chapter 8 . 2/9/2004
hey, it is me annonymous gundam, i am sorry it
took me so long to review, but i am doing it now.
i love this chapter, please, please, please! do
another chappie real soon, (oops) getting carried
away, anyway keep up the good work, and as always
i will keep reading and reviewing.
-annonymous gundam
annonymous gundam chapter 7 . 1/16/2004
i am so glad you up dated this, cant wait for the
next chappie to come up. i am really liking this story alot, so get another chapter up please! i
think you are way cool, _ *whoops!* i think i
am getting carried away. keep up the good work.
-annonymous gundam
p. s.( i remembered to review, yay me!)*.* _*
annonymous gundam chapter 6 . 1/10/2004
i really liked those two chapters, i hope you will
do another chapter soon. i think that shwartz,
and cloy are way cool! yes yes yes more more! oh
sorry got carried away. *starts laughing* anyway
i better go before i get too weird. (lol) _
anyway get another chappie up soon. *_*
-annonymous gundam
annonymous gundam chapter 4 . 12/29/2003
hey it is me annonymous gundam, ya i know i am
late reviewing this, but i got tired an busy.
but anyway, i hope you do another chappie soon.
take care, i will talk to you later, bye bye.
-annonymous gundam _
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