Reviews for Burn
EviLKiTTy chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
itz good, my fave line is 'I'll take the fire and make the world burn.' you could try next time go deeper, just some advice. english is ma worst subject o
Claraesque chapter 1 . 7/20/2001
coool!
Michelle chapter 1 . 6/18/2001
That was very impressive!
AniDragon chapter 1 . 4/5/2001
COOL! I love it! A bit short, but I'm not one to talk! Keep it up!
Duo Maxwell9998 chapter 1 . 2/10/2001
I like this one.
Kira Douji chapter 1 . 1/27/2001
Wow, this was very well written. The line usage here is wonderful. Even the rhythm was good, draws you into the poem. To tell the truth, I think your point of view, what it's actually like, and mine, are the same. Oh well, I'll stop babling, you keep writing. _

-Kira
Gohangirl Not signed in chapter 1 . 1/23/2001
Wow! I've always pictured it to feel something like that... I could definitely seen that from my Gohan's point of view. _
firefly chapter 1 . 1/19/2001
You were right, I DO like this poem.
jaguar chapter 1 . 1/6/2001
nothing to do with DBZ
jessica chapter 1 . 1/3/2001
oooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool!
AnimeAngelVidel chapter 1 . 1/3/2001
Wooaahh...that was cool
manga chapter 1 . 1/3/2001
Wow. I am very impressed. This is great! _
Seth Turtle chapter 1 . 1/3/2001
Cool poem. Makes me respect the power of a Super Saiyan even more when the pain they go through is described that way. Two thumbs up! )
J2 chapter 1 . 1/3/2001
Not bad at all. This is a nice, concise poem, and I think it describes the transformation well.

One little point: "its" should be written "it's" (the correct contraction of "it is.")
Shana Princess Of Darkness chapter 1 . 1/3/2001
Wow that's...that's wonderful it's so true and beautiful.
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