Reviews for Extracurricular Activities |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story, but it’s incomplete and long over. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually wrote a whole chapter once with Tonks/Harry... Harry waled in and Molly demands to know where Harry was. harry blushed and stammered then he suddenly had a brain fart and thought, 'none of your business.' When she persists in front of the full Order at the table, harry blows... "I WAS IN THE TOILET ON THE TOP FLOOR HAVING A BLOODY WANK! I USED BABY OIL TO MAKE MY HAND SLIPPY... ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO KNOW, MRS WEASLEY? NEXT TIME I'LL COME IN AND TELL YOU, OH, I'M OFF FOR A QUICK TUG, MRS WEASLEY, ANY ADVICE?" He changed his voice and continued, "Oh, yes son... just think about Ginny or Hermione naked, I'm sure that will get you stiff quite quick." In the now totally silent kitchen he stood up and walked out, winking at Tonks on the floor at the end of the table, her mouth covered as she shook in silent laughter... tears running down her cheeks... |
![]() ![]() Really like ypur charcters and their emotional portrayal |
![]() ![]() ![]() NEED MORE! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh i don’t really expect or dare hope this will be continued since last update was like almost 15 years ago and all... but anyway wanted to say this was so cute story. Honks is mostly always good but i don’t think i’ve ever seen them this much cute :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story! Great job writing! Your characters seem so very real! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, so much for update regularly lol. Its a really fun story. Too bad it won't be finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao that was awesome. |
![]() ![]() Ummm...So it's been 11 years :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! UPDATE! This story is awesome! ! ###############################################################$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ALWAYS love it when Harry asks to see Tonks' true form! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you going to update this story? Are you dead it's been 7 years since you last updated this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this fic and am hoping that you come back to it and write more on it. It is hard to find any HONKS stories that have some length and depth to them and the writers haven't given up on them and left them for dead. I am hoping you haven't done the same with this story because it has some very good points to it and a good story. I think having Tonks go to school with him would both keep the relationship going and be good to continue Harry's training for his destiny. Anyway I am keeping this short and just saying I hope you continue it soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't abandon it! Please come back and finish it! |