Reviews for Fragments of a Teenage Girl's Life
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 1/29/2017
Burnz chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
It was hard to pick the one I liked best. I think the Spanish teacher one and Items discovered were my favorites. Fun reading!
Spoons1899 chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Amazing. Simpy amazing.

The titles, the dialouge, the characters, the writing. Everything.

Your writing is incredible, and this is like a work of art. It IS a work of art.

Wonderful job.
Amarra17 chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
This was really random and really good and i really liked it. lol. but seriously it was an interesting collection of moments and i enjoyed it a lot. good job!
JazzPizza chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
I'm kind of lost for words right now, so excuse my verbal fumbling, but that was interesting...driftingly little bits of something too disturbing to be whimsy...
Nicely done, anyway, I liked it.
Ben is Glory chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
Oh my god, this was just so perfect. And the best part? Spike/Xander-yness!
Crystal chapter 1 . 12/26/2003
I've gotta say, you wrote this REALLY well. You have Dawn down really well. I REALLY liked the masterbating one and the one where Spike or i guess, not him, kills her. Keep writing. It's great.
gin chapter 1 . 12/17/2003
This was... incredibly good. You are so talented. I really hope you do more vignettes because you have a real knack for pulling someone through a couple of lines right before slam! knock the wind out of them with the last sentence. Yes, so I'm very enthusiastic. But really, keep writing! Please!
lydia chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
That was amazing! You had Dawn down perfectly. You also have a great balance of humor and pathos. I loved "Like a Fox" and the masturbating one (hilarious...and with such perfect dialgoue you don't need to ask who's saying what)
I'm not a Spander fan or Dawn/Amanda fan either but good work there.
Jessica chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
OMG! This is beyond amazing. Every single one is perfect,and you have Dawn, no matter what mood, down is just so good. You are such a talented writer. I can't pick a favorite because they were all so good. And I love how there all just short stories. I can't give you enough praise. Please write more like these.
Claire Starling chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
Wow, I think all of these were wonderful. Especially since a lot of them were DS... but the ones that weren't were good too. Continue your good work.