what a fantastic story. the way you balance angst and comedy is genius.

wait wait wait why is marked complete?

... did you/the-dementor kill him?

what happened?

fix it.

... please

Your voice for Harry is not JKR's Harry. He's mnore witty and cynical, but he's endearing and I enjoyed the read though it officially rings quite OOC to me.

Cheers!

And thanks for the read :)

Bridget

"In that moment I could not hate him. Then he vomited on my shoes. " brilliant

Absolutely brilliant, loved this story so much. :D

Just found this story, and I've truly enjoyed the first chapter. Now I'm looking forward to what comes next...

ha ha ha 'then he vomited on my shoes'

perfect

This is great! You should write a sequel!

I loved this story! Your style is just great, it makes the reading so very pleasant! And your storyline was good too! I loved the way you immerge us, reader, inside the character's head and the fact that sarcasm and humour are everywhere. Well, long story short, I spent a good time reading your story and I do hope for a sequel!

This is a fantastic story and I can't believe that I did not run across this sooner.

9.5/10 points for style.

I just finished reading and I really think I need to review; you deserved it by putting so much effort in this!

Firt of all, I suppose it should be classified as humour story, much more so than drama or adventure - it really WAS funny. I even woke up my roommate by laughing out aloud at some of the jokes.

I loved some of the scenes and liked the rest of it (though it took me some using to before I was comfortable with the ichform) and I think there are some really brilliang ideas. Hope you are considering to write a sequel :-)

Ah, snape. Just as pessimistic as always. I love this story, and totally hope you make a sequel!

awesome is or will their be a spinn off or continuationplz best fic ive read in a long time

Oh my.

Again you amaze me with unique ideas.