Reviews for What Comes Next
Burnz chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Nicely done vignette. :)
Al Rush chapter 1 . 12/27/2003
Sorry about taking so long to review, the Holidays is a source for great insanity.
Looks like a promising beginning. I think more actual dialog between characters would help though.
duj chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
Very promising fic, great start and interesting perspective.
One thing you could improve however is the occasional clumsy construction, eg
1) the repetition of "look/looked" in
"It was hard to look at Spike’s face like that. He looked the way she looked."
2) "from/as it" in
"Spike moved his hand from it... She wondered if she felt the same as it.."
Allyson chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
Excellent work! - a very well-written and poignant little look at the aftermath of Buffy's death. I enjoyed the parallels between Dawn and Spike. And Dawn trying to figure out what to do with her dress was a nice Stuff!
Claire Starling chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
Wow-ch. Too good fics in one day. Wonderful, dearest. More soon.