I found it hard to follow..

eeeeeeek! i loved this!

I just realizied she reads Latin does that mean that she is going to camp Jupiter to

Hey man this seems like a good story, it really does, but 'colored' is a pretty racist term. It's super outdated and derogatory, I would explain it more but there's sources on google that do a much better job on that than I ever would. Please, revise this part of your story. I would love to read on, but I just can't get past this part. I hope you consider what I've said, and I mean this in no condescending or rude way but I just can't continue to read this story. Have a nice day

That was so amazing

I still love this story!
I will never get tired of this one, it's amazing!

Interesting story...

I love! Amazing! x

This was...just wow. Never have been through anything like this personally, I still felt as if I could connect with the characters' pain because of the way you described them. I also liked how you put little snippets of song lyrics and such; it helped the reader to grasp what the character was feeling at that point in time. The ending was great and I'm glad they admitted how they felt before the story ended. This was great, thank you!

A few nitpicks:

Malfoy Manor, not Manner

Madam Pomfrey, not Pomphrey.

Otherwise great story.

This chapter really confused me. Why is Malfoy at her house? Why was Dumbledore there? Granger Manor? Since when is it a manor?

Awesome! So where's the epilogue? ha.

She should have run away to Las Vegas, get a job and an apartment there, then hide from everyone. that's what I did when the Hermione in my story found out she wasn't real. Oh, but I haven't posted that part yet...

... that was dark... angsty... I loved it! except, you know, it was kinda disturbing.

I want a milano. jeez... that girl just does not get a break.