Reviews for Her Perfect Facade
Jupitar jazz chapter 1 . 12/2/2022
I found it hard to follow..
no.1dramionefan chapter 18 . 7/22/2021
eeeeeeek! i loved this!
Laycie Spoon chapter 10 . 9/25/2018
I just realizied she reads Latin does that mean that she is going to camp Jupiter to
Guest chapter 2 . 5/28/2018
Hey man this seems like a good story, it really does, but 'colored' is a pretty racist term. It's super outdated and derogatory, I would explain it more but there's sources on google that do a much better job on that than I ever would. Please, revise this part of your story. I would love to read on, but I just can't get past this part. I hope you consider what I've said, and I mean this in no condescending or rude way but I just can't continue to read this story. Have a nice day
A friend chapter 18 . 3/20/2018
That was so amazing
cecesoleil chapter 10 . 6/25/2014
I still love this story!
I will never get tired of this one, it's amazing!
literally-lame chapter 4 . 4/1/2013
Interesting story...
DollyX chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
I love! Amazing! x
StoneFeather30135 chapter 18 . 10/15/2011
This was...just wow. Never have been through anything like this personally, I still felt as if I could connect with the characters' pain because of the way you described them. I also liked how you put little snippets of song lyrics and such; it helped the reader to grasp what the character was feeling at that point in time. The ending was great and I'm glad they admitted how they felt before the story ended. This was great, thank you!
sunneedee chapter 7 . 9/19/2011
A few nitpicks:

Malfoy Manor, not Manner

Madam Pomfrey, not Pomphrey.

Otherwise great story.
yay chapter 3 . 6/10/2011
This chapter really confused me. Why is Malfoy at her house? Why was Dumbledore there? Granger Manor? Since when is it a manor?
This Is My Escape chapter 18 . 6/2/2011
Awesome! So where's the epilogue? ha.
Elliot Green chapter 13 . 3/8/2008
She should have run away to Las Vegas, get a job and an apartment there, then hide from everyone. that's what I did when the Hermione in my story found out she wasn't real. Oh, but I haven't posted that part yet...
Elliot Green chapter 11 . 3/8/2008
... that was dark... angsty... I loved it! except, you know, it was kinda disturbing.
Elliot Green chapter 10 . 3/8/2008
I want a milano. jeez... that girl just does not get a break.
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