|Reviews for Sin|
| adventsign chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
Very interesting piece. I especially like the faculty member being a threatening figure, even that early in Garden's life. Foreshadow-y for the rebellion part.
Technically there's a couple of run-on sentences that I would cut down, but otherwise very well written.
| myeerah chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
Nice. Very, very. . . nice. You write understated pain so well. :)