Reviews for Broken Wings
Guest chapter 4 . 7/19/2016
well that was fun! this was well written and paced with good characterizations (especially of Krad who is always quite a mystery). I get that sometimes the spark leaves and you just gotta abandon the story. thanks anyway for the interesting chapters.
Ai Star chapter 4 . 5/1/2009
what a twist, this is really good, keep up the good work! update soon! W
Kirian chapter 4 . 4/7/2008
Please write finish! The plot seems interesting, and you tell it from Krad's POV too. And the writing style is good. Description not too overbearing anjd granmar almost perfect.
CharmedLostie4ever chapter 4 . 1/27/2008
really great story so far! please update soon!
cat chapter 4 . 1/21/2008
I want more.
Someone's Charm chapter 3 . 12/16/2007
When I returned to your profile page and saw you were "unpacking your bags", I became ecstatic to see you back. As an ardent reader of Broken Wings, I never took you off my favorites or alerts. From what you revealed about chapter 5, I'm looking forward to it even more.

Really, it is great to see such a talented, thoughtful writer return to I hope your writing goes well.

Ciao For Now Everyone!
aline chapter 4 . 8/28/2007
hey...i', wasn't that obvious?...hehe :) uhm, i just want to say how i really love you're stories... and when i say stories i mean all of them, well what i read so far that is...that is if you've already deleted some of them...hehe...well, i really love you're writing style, that's why i wanted to write and express my feeling thru writing. i guess a lot of writers here is the same...but you can't say i'm as good as you..hehe..i'm just a beginner, but i just have a lot to say and want to get everything out you know...

...i really think you're a great writer and i still hope in finding more of you're works in the future...and continuing to inspire more people...just like me! hehe...thnx by the way!...

i hope you could read this long...and when i say long...i really mean long review...haha...and if you still have time drop for me an e-mail... by the way, thnx for the great stories... :)
rebel of reality chapter 4 . 3/23/2007
write more please its good
Wind Scythe chapter 4 . 3/17/2007
I love it when people make it satoshiXrisaXkrad! KYA! you're the best! But does Krad really love Risa? or even like?
alyin chapter 4 . 9/16/2006

its so cute . . .

but i never imagine krad to fall in love

hehehehehe . . .

he's hot

but he keeps hurting sato

if he hurts sato he hurts me too


hehehehe . . .

its nice super cute!
Kyaroru-san chapter 4 . 7/13/2006
Great story update when you can

agony chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
waiting for ur updates are killing me...

I love the story...

hate the wait...
polarj13 chapter 4 . 4/21/2006
omy gosh!

i loved this piece!

i really look foward to the next chapter!
Skavnema chapter 4 . 4/2/2006
really cool! this fanfic is awesome!
doom-saga chapter 4 . 3/10/2006
omg that was awosme!oh please write more!
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