|Reviews for Broken Wings|
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/19
well that was fun! this was well written and paced with good characterizations (especially of Krad who is always quite a mystery). I get that sometimes the spark leaves and you just gotta abandon the story. thanks anyway for the interesting chapters.
| Ai Star chapter 4 . 5/1/2009
what a twist, this is really good, keep up the good work! update soon! W
| Kirian chapter 4 . 4/7/2008
Please write finish! The plot seems interesting, and you tell it from Krad's POV too. And the writing style is good. Description not too overbearing anjd granmar almost perfect.
| CharmedLostie4ever chapter 4 . 1/27/2008
really great story so far! please update soon!
| cat chapter 4 . 1/21/2008
I want more.
| Someone's Charm chapter 3 . 12/16/2007
When I returned to your profile page and saw you were "unpacking your bags", I became ecstatic to see you back. As an ardent reader of Broken Wings, I never took you off my favorites or alerts. From what you revealed about chapter 5, I'm looking forward to it even more.
Really, it is great to see such a talented, thoughtful writer return to I hope your writing goes well.
Ciao For Now Everyone!
| aline chapter 4 . 8/28/2007
hey...i'm...me...well, wasn't that obvious?...hehe :) uhm, i just want to say how i really love you're stories... and when i say stories i mean all of them, well what i read so far that is...that is if you've already deleted some of them...hehe...well, i really love you're writing style, that's why i wanted to write and express my feeling thru writing. i guess a lot of writers here is the same...but you can't say i'm as good as you..hehe..i'm just a beginner, but i just have a lot to say and want to get everything out you know...
...i really think you're a great writer and i still hope in finding more of you're works in the future...and continuing to inspire more people...just like me! hehe...thnx by the way!...
i hope you could read this long...and when i say long...i really mean long review...haha...and if you still have time drop for me an e-mail... by the way, thnx for the great stories... :)
| rebel of reality chapter 4 . 3/23/2007
write more please its good
| Wind Scythe chapter 4 . 3/17/2007
I love it when people make it satoshiXrisaXkrad! KYA! you're the best! But does Krad really love Risa? or even like?
| alyin chapter 4 . 9/16/2006
its so cute . . .
but i never imagine krad to fall in love
hehehehehe . . .
but he keeps hurting sato
if he hurts sato he hurts me too
hehehehe . . .
its nice super cute!
| Kyaroru-san chapter 4 . 7/13/2006
Great story update when you can
| agony chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
waiting for ur updates are killing me...
I love the story...
hate the wait...
| polarj13 chapter 4 . 4/21/2006
i loved this piece!
i really look foward to the next chapter!
| Skavnema chapter 4 . 4/2/2006
really cool! this fanfic is awesome!
| doom-saga chapter 4 . 3/10/2006
omg that was awosme!oh please write more!