Reviews for Venus Revealed
Karin chapter 5 . 1/7/2004
Is there any chance that we'll be reading another Jocelyn/Adhemar or Kate/Adhemar story soon?
Anchovyeater1 chapter 5 . 1/6/2004
This is getting oh, so interesting! I too saw the similarities between Thatcher and Adhemar and I am so glad it was mentioned in your story. Adhemar did grow up and he has become quite a character. A character we care for because of your fine writing. You brought out the best in him and we want to see more of it. Please continue soon!
Anchovyeater1 chapter 4 . 12/31/2003
So good and so revealing. How I crave for more!
Anchovyeater1 chapter 3 . 12/28/2003
What a great twist in the story! How I love the games Adhemar and Jocelyn are playing. They are so typical of their characters and you captured it perfectly. How fitting that Adhemar is the victor. Please continue soon. This story has my devoted attention and I can't wait for more!
MarieNymph chapter 2 . 12/10/2003
I like this a lot so far. Your realistic portayals of the characters make the fic an interesting read. Hope you continue soon!