|Reviews for The Mystery Mansion|
| kitnanmc chapter 16 . 3/3
I thought this story was excellent. Extremely well written. Of course I cannot wait for a sequel, in which I hope Nancy and Frank will get together. I thought you did an excellent job sticking to the characters' true selves. I like Lexi and Claire and think they can be kept in a sequel, if they are kept how they are. I find, often original characters are used to the detriment of the original characters. You wrote Claire and Lexi in perfectly, making me interested in their story line, but still making it clear this story was really about Nancy and the Hardy Boys. They were included seamlessly, as often other characters are in the published super novels.
| Booknerd22 chapter 16 . 1/26
Please do a sequel
| M chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
i liked it at frist BUT then you lost me and NED WOULD NEVER CHEAT ON NANCY NEVER!
| Banananonymous chapter 16 . 7/10/2013
I loved this and you need to make a sequel! Please! I need to know what happens between Nancy and Frank! I need closure!
| Sourcherry96 chapter 13 . 7/8/2013
Hahaha I figured it out before you revealed it. I feel so proud! :) that was a good one though! Really had me stumped for a bit.
| xXHalfPrinceXx chapter 16 . 5/31/2013
I'd love to see a sequel for this! I really want to see a sequel focused on Nancy and the Hardy Boys, but I wouldn't mind if you put Lexi and Claire in as well _
| Caitlyn chapter 16 . 5/31/2013
That was really good. I hope you do a sequal, and the twins are awesome so more pleasse
| Dani9513 chapter 10 . 5/31/2013
"Well, there was this time in Utah. I was hiding under a bed with my friend, Allison, in her boyfriend's apartment." One of the funniest moments ever. And you mentioned Desperate MEasures, one of my favorites.
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/30/2013
I absolutely loved this story! This was the first hardy boys/Nancy Drew story that I had read and I was so happy to see it updated and finished.
I would love for a sequel! It would be awesome to see Lexi and Claire again as well.
| WisdomOwl4Eternity chapter 12 . 5/26/2013
the next victim is Nancy. If you read the first letter of each line you get Nancy Drew/ something close to that. I think the killer is Max b/c he likes coffee and the killer had coffee grounds in the hole.
| Spok2me chapter 16 . 5/26/2013
I like Claire and Lexi so I don't mind if you use them, but what I really want to know is how Nancy and Frank play out. FIngers crossed.
| Spok2me chapter 15 . 5/26/2013
So glad to see you finally updated. I had almost given up on this awesome story. Thanks for making my day!
| Eliza chapter 16 . 5/16/2013
I would love to have Lexi and Claire in the sequel!
| James Birdsong chapter 16 . 5/4/2013
Cool sixteen chapters. Stay with Nancy Drew and Hardy Boys.
| pixeljam chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Okay, first of all, fabulous story! I really appreciate how you let Nancy and Frank's relationship play out like a real one would. I'm currently working on a story where the characters actually take (surprise surprise) over six months to get together. It's refreshing to see someone else do the some, where the romance doesn't take the front seat and take over the whole story and get all annoying. All in all, though, very good job! I've been looking for some good mystery stories lately, and this one is pretty darned good.
Anyhow, I'd love to see Lexi and Claire in the next story. They added in some good sparks of life into the Nancy Drew/Hardy Boys story. I love their characters. Keep up the great work and I'll be waiting.